Life is like a glass of wine
Life is like a glass of wine , and will always offer infinite wonders to those who truly love it. If you observe the wine in the hand, the dark red liquid is like blood flowing which symbolizes the vividness of life. If you take a sip, the aftertaste left in your mouth is sweet with a little bitterness as the life is complicated. If you take a swallow , the lingering fragrance refreshes the heart and soul with benefits. The more vintage the wine is, the better it is. So is life--the richer, the better. When you are old, life is full of generosity and wisdom, like a bottle of wine to be opened, with dark colors and rich flavor.
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Life is like a glass of wine
Life is like a glass of wine, and will always offer infinite wonders to those who truly love it. If you observe the wine in the hand, the dark red liquid is like blood flowing which symbolizes the vividness of life. If you take a sip, the aftertaste left in your mouth is sweet with a little bitterness just as the life is complicated. If you take a swallow , the lingering aroma fragrance refreshes the heart and soul with benefits. The older more vintage the wine is, the better it is. So is life--the richer, the better. When you are old, life is full of generosity and wisdom, like a bottle of wine to be opened, dark in colour with dark colors and rich in flavor.
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@robinho999 I appriciate the sentence very much and I think it should be the highlight at the end of the passage.
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I shall like to grow into an old man of wisdom, peace and of fragrance.
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Thanks for your praise.
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Very well
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