Alchemist
I really like riding books. One of my favorite books is the novel The Alchemist. It was written by Paulo Coelho.
This book tells us about a Santiago shepherd traveling with his sheep in Spain.
One day, he had a dream that he had gone to the Pyramids of Egypt and found a treasure there. He also had this dream another year ago. So it turns out that he decided to sell the sheep. And take a trip to the Pyramids.
All book is about him and his passions, adventures and thoughts, that he is going through in his trip. He meets a lot of great people.
This book has a lot of philosophical thoughts. But thay all are very simple!!! And great.
I read Alchemist a lot of times, Im very happy about that.
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The Alchemist
I really like reading books. One of my favorites is the novel, The Alchemist, by Paulo Coelho. This book tells us about a shepherd from Santiago traveling with his sheep in Spain. One day, he had a dream that he had gone to the Egyptian pyramids and found a treasure there. He also had this same dream another year earlier. As a result, it turns out that he decided to sell the sheep and actually visit these man-made wonders. The entire book is about him, his passions, his adventures, and his thoughts as he is undergoing his trip, which allows him to meet many interesting, if not amazing, people. Although this book presents a wide range of philosophical thought, it is all incredibly easy for a reader to understand and apply to his or her life. I have even re-read The Alchemist a number of times, which is something that never fails to bring me great happiness.*
Hi, Bohdan. Good job! Whatever changes I made were to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify your thoughts, and for ease of reading. My sincerest apologies if I have misinterpreted. I hope that this helps you, Jonathan.
*For titles of books, films, magazines, etc., you need to put them in italics, quotation marks, or underline them.
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Alchemist
I really like riding reading books. One of my favorite books is the novel The Alchemist. It was written by Paulo Coelho. This book tells us about a Santiago shepherd traveling with his sheep in Spain.
One day, he had a dream that he had gone to the Pyramids of Egypt and found a treasure there. He also had this the same dream another a year ago. So it turns out that he decided to sell the sheep and take a trip to the Pyramids.
The whole All book is about him and his passions, adventures and thoughts that he is going through in on his trip. He meets a lot of great people. This book has a lot of philosophical thoughts. But they all are very simple!!! And great.
I have read The Alchemist a lot of times, I’m very happy about that.
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