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大家好。我叫 Razilya. 我的中文名字是 杨思雅 (谢谢你, Carmen). 我二十七岁。 我是从俄罗斯来的。我住在 Uchaly, Bashkortostan.
我家有三口人 – 妈妈，爸爸和我。我的妈妈的名字是 Rasima, 爸爸的 是 Zufar。他们 都五十九岁。 他们都 退休了。 我的家庭住在乡村。
我住在城市。 我有一个房子。我是语言学家。 现在我在MFC (Multifunctional center)公司工作。我是 领先专家。我每个月工作约十六天。我每次走路上班。
我有时间的时候，我喜欢学习语言， 看书，看电影， 听音乐，交朋友。 现在我学习汉语， 西班牙语， 印地语和 英语。我很喜欢学习语言。我要学韩文， 土耳其语。我的梦想是成为 一名多种语言。
Hello everyone. I’m Razilya. My Chinese name is Yangsiya (thank you, Carmen). I’m 27. I’m from Russia. I live in Uchaly, Bashkortostan.
There are 3 people in my family – mum, dad and I. Mum’s name is Rasima, dad’s is Zufar. Both of them are 59. Both of them are retired. My family live in village.
I live in town. I have a flat. I’m a philologist. Now I’m working for MFC (Multifunctional center). I’m a leading specialist. I work about 16 days per month. I walk to work every time.
When I have time, I like to learn languages, rear books, watch movies, listen to music, make friends. Now I’m learning Chinese, Spanish, Hindi and English. I love learning languages. I want to learn Korean, Turkish. My dream is to be a polyglot.
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hi, you did a good job. I corrected some of your words in bold.
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请检查我的笔记 Please check my note. I want to learn it.
大家好。我叫Razilya。我的中文名字是 杨思雅 (谢谢你, Carmen)。我二十七岁。我来自俄罗斯。我住在 Uchaly, Bashkortostan.
我家有三口人 – 妈妈，爸爸和我。我妈妈的名字是Rasima, 爸爸的是Zufar。他们都是五十九岁。 他们都退休了。 我的家人住在乡村。
我住在城市。 我有一个房子。我是语言学家。现在我在MFC (Multifunctional center)公司工作。我是领先专家。我每个月工作约十六天。我都走路上班。
我有时间的时候喜欢学习语言，看书，看电影， 听音乐和交朋友。 我现在正在学习汉语， 西班牙语， 印地语和英语。我很喜欢学习语言。我还要学韩文和土耳其语。我的梦想是成为 一名多语言者。
Hello everyone. I’m Razilya. My Chinese name is Yangsiya (thank you, Carmen). I’m 27. I’m from Russia. I live in Uchaly, Bashkortostan.
There are 3 people in my family – mum, dad and I. Mum’s name is Rasima, dad’s is Zufar. Both of them are 59. Both of them are retired. My family live in village.
I live in town. I have a flat. I’m a philologist. Now I’m working for MFC (Multifunctional center). I’m a leading specialist. I work about 16 days per month. I walk to work every time.
When I have time, I like to learn languages, rear books, watch movies, listen to music, make friends. Now I’m learning Chinese, Spanish, Hindi and English. I love learning languages. I want to learn Korean, Turkish. My dream is to be a polyglot.
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请检查我的笔记 Please check my note. I want to learn it.
大家好，我叫 Razilya。 我的中文名字是 杨思雅 (谢谢你, Carmen)。 我今年二十七岁， 我来自俄罗斯。我住在 Uchaly, Bashkortostan。
我家一共有三口人 – 妈妈，爸爸和我。我的妈妈的名字是 Rasima, 爸爸的 是 Zufar。他们都五十九岁。 他们都退休了。 我的家住在乡村。
我住在城市。 我有一个房子。我是语言学家。 现在，我在MFC (Multifunctional center)公司工作。我是领先专家。我每个月工作约十六天。我每次走路上班。
我有时间的时候，我喜欢学习语言， 看书，看电影， 听音乐，交朋友。 现在我在学习汉语， 西班牙语， 印地语和 英语。我很喜欢学习语言。我要学韩文， 土耳其语。我的梦想是成为 一名多种语言家。
Hello everyone. I’m Razilya. My Chinese name is Yangsiya (thank you, Carmen). I’m 27. I’m from Russia. I live in Uchaly, Bashkortostan.
There are 3 people in my family – mum, dad and I. Mum’s name is Rasima, dad’s is Zufar. Both of them are 59. Both of them are retired. My family live in village.
I live in town. I have a flat. I’m a philologist. Now I’m working for MFC (Multifunctional center). I’m a leading specialist. I work about 16 days per month. I walk to work every time.
When I have time, I like to learn languages, rear books, watch movies, listen to music, make friends. Now I’m learning Chinese, Spanish, Hindi and English. I love learning languages. I want to learn Korean, Turkish. My dream is to be a polyglot.
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请检查我的笔记 Please check my note. I want to learn it.
大家好。我叫 Razilya. 我的中文名字是杨思雅 (谢谢你, Carmen). 我二十七岁。 我是从俄罗斯来的(better :我来自俄罗斯) 。我住在 Uchaly, Bashkortostan.
我家有三口人 – 妈妈，爸爸和我。我的妈妈的名字是 Rasima, 爸爸的是 Zufar。他们都是五十九岁。 他们，都已經退休了。 我他們的家庭住在乡村。
我住在城市，。 我自己有一棟个房子。我是语言学家。 现在我目前在MFC (Multifunctional center)公司工作。我是领先专家。我每个月工作约十六天。我每次都走路上班。
我有时间的时候，我喜欢学习语言， 看书，看电影， 听音乐，交朋友。 现在我学习汉语， 西班牙语， 印地语和 英语。我很喜欢学习语言。我還要学韩文， 土耳其语。我的梦想是成为 一名多种语言者。
Hello everyone. I’m Razilya. My Chinese name is Yangsiya (thank you, Carmen). I’m 27. I’m from Russia. I live in Uchaly, Bashkortostan.
There are 3 people in my family – mum, dad and I. Mum’s name is Rasima, dad’s is Zufar. Both of them are 59. Both of them are retired. My family live in village.
I live in town. I have a flat. I’m a philologist. Now I’m working for MFC (Multifunctional center). I’m a leading specialist. I work about 16 days per month. I walk to work every time.
When I have time, I like to learn languages, rear books, watch movies, listen to music, make friends. Now I’m learning Chinese, Spanish, Hindi and English. I love learning languages. I want to learn Korean, Turkish. My dream is to be a polyglot.
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请检查我的笔记 Please check my note. I want to learn it.
大家好。我叫 Razilya. 我的中文名字是 杨思雅 (谢谢你, Carmen). 我今年二十七岁。 我来自俄罗斯。我的家乡是 Uchaly, Bashkortostan.
我家有三口人 – 妈妈，爸爸和我。我的妈妈的名字是 Rasima, 爸爸的名字是 Zufar。他们 都五十九岁了。 他们现在都已经退休了。 我的家人们住在乡村。（或者：我的老家在乡下）
我现在住在城市。 我有一个房子。我是一名语言学家。 目前我在MFC (Multifunctional center)公司任职。我是 一名领先专家。我每个月约工作十六天。我每天都走路上班。
在我空暇的时候，我喜欢学习语言， 看书，看电影， 听音乐，交朋友。 目前我在学习汉语， 西班牙语， 印地语和 英语。我很喜欢学习各种语言。我还想要学韩文， 土耳其语。我的梦想是成为 一名多种语言工作者。（或者：我的梦想是成为一个会多种语言的人）
Hello everyone. I’m Razilya. My Chinese name is Yangsiya (thank you, Carmen). I’m 27. I’m from Russia. I live in Uchaly, Bashkortostan.
There are 3 people in my family – mum, dad and I. Mum’s name is Rasima, dad’s is Zufar. Both of them are 59. Both of them are retired. My family live in village.
I live in town. I have a flat. I’m a philologist. Now I’m working for MFC (Multifunctional center). I’m a leading specialist. I work about 16 days per month. I walk to work every time.
When I have time, I like to learn languages, rear books, watch movies, listen to music, make friends. Now I’m learning Chinese, Spanish, Hindi and English. I love learning languages. I want to learn Korean, Turkish. My dream is to be a polyglot.
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