A goodbye for now
Today I am looking for the best way to tell you 'goodbye'. And when I look at you a pain arises inside my heart. Today my eyes are looking as so often, this gray autumn. In spite of everything, today I am praying that you are happy.
The day will come when my time will be only for you. The day will come when my singing will be a happy singing. When I am gone remember that there is someone who thinks of you. When the day dies remember that there is someone who lives for you.
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A goodbye for now (Goodbye for Now)
Today I am looking for the best way to tell you 'goodbye'. And When I look at you a *pain arises inside my heart (my heart aches). **Today my eyes are looking as so often, this gray autumn. In spite of everything, today I am praying that you are happy.
The day will come when my time will be only for you (yours alone). The day will come when my singing will be a happy singing (song will be a happy song). When I am gone remember that there is someone who thinks of you. When the day dies remember that there is someone who lives for you.
*saying "my heart aches" is a more natural way to say this phrase
**This phrase gets lost in translation. What feeling are your eyes conveying this gray Autumn?
This is very poetic, and most translates well! I would suggest some alternative phrases that I have highlighted in green. "My heart aches" is a common phrase when talking about missing someone you love. The only phrase that I can't understand is "Today my eyes are looking as so often". If you can describe more what you are trying to say/convey, I may be able to help you with this phrase. Great writing!
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