Do you like dogs ?
Today I had a lesson with James ,and a few dogs were barking. After the lesson, now I really miss my dog Fafa .She is now living with my sister.
Fafa is very cute ，she likes to play with us .She can shake hands and pretend to be shoot.
The most thankful thing is when I wanted to stay in my dark room alone Fafa was always with me .She comforted me when I felt desperate last year .
Although I am not living with her any more ,She wud give me a big hug every time we meet .
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Do you like dogs ?
Today I had a lesson with James, and in the background a few dogs were barking. After the lesson was over, now I really missed my dog Fafa. She is now living with my sister now.
Fafa is very cute, and she likes to play with us. She can shake hands and pretend to be shot.
The thing I am most thankful for thing is that when I wanted to stay in my dark room alone, Fafa was always stayed with me. She comforted me last year when I felt desperate. last year .
Although I am not living with her anymore, she will wud still give me a big hug every time we meet.
Fafa sounds wonderful. I have 6 dogs and they are like children to me. Your writing is good. Just be careful with your punctuation. You are putting your spaces before the punctuation mark instead of after it.
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Do you like dogs ?
Today I had a lesson with James, and a few dogs were barking. After Since the lesson, I am really missing my dog, Fafa. She is now living with my sister.
Fafa is very cute. ，She likes to play with us. She can shake hands and pretend to be shoot.
The thing that makes me most thankful thing is that, when I wanted to stay in my dark room alone, Fafa was always with me. She comforted me when I felt desperate last year.
Although I am not living with her any more, she would give me a big hug every time we meet.
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Do you like dogs ?
Today I had a lesson with James ,and after the lesson, a few dogs were barking. After the lesson, now I really miss my dog Fafa .She is now living with my sister.
Fafa is very cute, she likes to play with us .She can shake hands and pretend to be shot shoot.
I am most thankful for The most thankful thing is when I wanted to stay in my dark room alone Fafa was always with me .She comforted me when I felt desperate last year .
Although I am not living with her any more ,She would wud give me a big hug every time we meet .
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Your dog sounds amazing!! I wish I had a cute dog to cuddle and play with too :)
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Thank you ! Fafa must be happy if she knows what you said . Because she really likes to play with human.
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