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Would you like to be immortal?
Show me the person, who doesn't want to live longer than eighty or even one hundred years. But what would you do, if you have immortal? Would be your family immortal too? Husband or wife, children? If they won't, how live with knowledge they will die soon? Of course, as long as they're alive I would spend all of your time with them. I would like to remember every smile, every hug, every laugh. And it's strange and sad to think about future like this.
It would be better if family has the same ability.
So everyone can achieve everything. And nobody could say “I don't have time”.
We are used to think that we don't have enough time to change our speciality. When we are 50 years old, it's hard to find new job. But in this case we may become doctor even after 100 years old. Or start new sport and get very good results. We may go to University and drop it out and try something new.
We may find that we really like. We may work not because need money, but because we like to do it.
If you don't have family, you needn't hurry. You don't have to have children because of time.
Those who can do what they like every day are heroes for me.
I want to be healthy and strong, live longer. If I were immortal I would try to live in different countries. I would like to find life's work. I would like to live without regret about wasting time.
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Please correct mistakes🙏
Would you like to be immortal?
Show me any person, who doesn't want to live longer than eighty or even one hundred years. But what would you do, if you were immortal? Would be your family immortal too? Husband or wife, children? If they were not, how would you live with this knowledge that they would die soon? Of course, as long as they're alive, I would spend all of my time with them. I would like to remember every smile, every hug, every laugh. And it's strange and upsetting to think about future like this.
It would be better if family members had similar lifetime.
Thus, everyone could achieve everything. And nobody could say “I don't have time”.
We are used to think that we don't have enough time to change our speciality. When we are 50 years old, it's hard to find new job. But in this case we may become a doctor even after 100 years old or may start for new sportive activities and get very good results. We may go to University and drop it out and try something new.
We may find that we really like. We may work not because we need money, but because we like to do it.
If you don't have family, you don't need to hurry. You don't have to have children because of time.
Those who can do what they like every day are heroes for me.
I want to be healthy and strong, live longer. If I were immortal, I would try to live in different countries. I would like to find life's work. I would like to live without regret about wasting time.
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Please correct mistakes🙏
Would you like to be immortal?
Show me the person, who doesn't want to live longer than eighty or even one hundred years. But what would you do, if you were immortal? Would be your family immortal too? Husband or wife, children? If they weren't, how would you live with the knowledge they will die soon? Of course, as long as they're alive I would spend all of your time with them. I would like to remember every smile, every hug, every laugh. And it's strange and sad to think about a/the future like this.
It would be better if family has the same ability.
So everyone can achieve everything. And nobody could say “I don't have time”.
We are used to thinking that we don't have enough time to change our speciality (this is correct grammar, but sounds unnatural. It might be better to simply say 'to change what we do'). When we are 50 years old, it's hard to find a new job. But in this case we may become doctor even after we are 100 years old. Or start a new sport and get very good results. We may go to University and drop it out and try something new.
We may find that which we really like. We may work not because need money, but because we like to do it.
If you don't have family, you needn't hurry. You don't have to have children because of time.
Those who can do what they like every day are heroes for me.
I want to be healthy and strong, live longer. If I were immortal I would try to live in different countries. I would like to find life's work. I would like to live without regret about wasting time.
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