Notebook #13
今日は毎二年の健康診断の日でした。よく夜更かしして、予約は早かったですので、少しきつく起きました。また、今朝の運転時に、道路の上はたくさん雪でしたので、渋滞がありました。幸せに、医者の事務所の出口は近かったですので、長く待ちませんでした。
質問：前の文に「ので」を繰り返しすぎると思います。こちらの文を言い換え教えていただけませんか？
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Today was the day of my biennial checkup. As I often slept late and the appointment was early in the morning, I had some trouble waking up. Afterwards though when driving in the morning, there was some traffic due to the heavy snow on the road. Luckily, the exit to the doctor's was close, so I didn't need to wait long.
Q: In the previous sentences I had repeated ので often. Could I possibly get some suggestions/tips/corrections on how to reword these sentences or some alternative conjunctions to use?
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Notebook #13
今日は毎二年の健康診断の日でした。
→今日は二年に一度の健康診断の日でした。
よく夜更かしして、予約は早かったですので、少しきつく起きました。
→朝早い予約だったのに夜更かししてしまい、起きるのが大変でした。
また、今朝の運転時に、道路の上はたくさん雪でしたので、渋滞がありました。
→また、今朝は積雪のために渋滞していました。
幸せに、医者の事務所の出口は近かったですので、長く待ちませんでした。
→幸い(さいわい)、病院の出口は近かったので、長く待たずにすみました。
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Today was the day of my biennial checkup. As I often slept late and the appointment was early in the morning, I had some trouble waking up. Afterwards though when driving in the morning, there was some traffic due to the heavy snow on the road. Luckily, the exit to the doctor's was close, so I didn't need to wait long.
Q: In the previous sentences I had repeated ので often. Could I possibly get some suggestions/tips/corrections on how to reword these sentences or some alternative conjunctions to use?
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