I want to use “YouTube”
Recently,I found a software in the”xiaohongshu”app is “YouTube”.All of the world people use it,so I also want to see something what happened in other countries.I went to the App Store and opened it smoothly,but when I go in,I found I can’t use it.I tried so many method,such as:ask my friend who is in America,download some software to solve this problem,but no result.I want to use YouTube,Ins and facebook,but in China,these seems to be banned.Okay,finally I found this app,I can also make friends in there,so I’m satisfied.
My English is not good,trouble everyone correct me please,and welcome to make conversation with me.
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I want to use “YouTube”
Recently,I found a one of the pieces of software in the”xiaohongshu”app is “YouTube”.All of over the world people use it,so I also want to see something what that happened in other countries.I went to the App Store and opened it smoothly,but when I go went/got in,I found I can’t use it.I tried so many methods,such as:asking my friend who is in America,download some software to solve this problem,but with no result.I want to use YouTube,Ins and facebook,but in China,these seems to be banned.Okay,finally I found this app,I can also make friends in there,so I’m satisfied.
My English is not good,trouble everyone do/would you mind correcting me please,and welcome to make have conversation with me.
Also remember to put a space after full stops and commas.
Your English is not bad. Some errors but generally well constructed. The meaning is very clear and you use some nice vocabulary.
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妹子你的英语里面错误很多，修改约等于重写。少量的错误好修改，错误多了修改就比较麻烦了。但这并不意味着你英语学不好。不怕差，只要努力、进步快，什么都有可能。
你可以在网上找一下，有没有（免费或收费的）语法在线检查工具。只要你把自己的英语文本输进去，它就可以很快地帮你修改好。
我以前碰到好多次它们的广告，但是没有仔细看，也没有用过。但是估计应该对你有帮助。
另外，你也可以使用有道翻译、百度翻译、谷歌翻译，也会有帮助。
这些工具都不是百分百正确或准确，但是他们不怕累，也不会烦，随叫随到。
I want to use “YouTube”
Recently,I found a software in the”xiaohongshu”app is “YouTube”.All of the world people use it,so I also want to see something what happened in other countries.I went to the App Store and opened it smoothly,but when I go in,I found I can’t use it.I tried so many method,such as:ask my friend who is in America,download some software to solve this problem,but no result.I want to use YouTube,Ins and facebook,but in China,these seems to be banned.Okay,finally I found this app,I can also make friends in there,so I’m satisfied.
My English is not good,trouble everyone correct me please,and welcome to make conversation with me.
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妹子你的英语里面错误很多，修改约等于重写。少量的错误好修改，错误多了修改就比较麻烦了。但这并不意味着你英语学不好。不怕差，只要努力、进步快，什么都有可能。
你可以在网上找一下，有没有（免费或收费的）语法在线检查工具。只要你把自己的英语文本输进去，它就可以很快地帮你修改好。
我以前碰到好多次它们的广告，但是没有仔细看，也没有用过。但是估计应该对你有帮助。
另外，你也可以使用有道翻译、百度翻译、谷歌翻译，也会有帮助。
这些工具都不是百分百正确或准确，但是他们不怕累，也不会烦，随叫随到。
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下载一个vpn就可以用YouTube了
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