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๐Ÿ“ฎืžื›ืชื‘ื™ื โœ‰ ื‘ื›ื ื•ืช, ืื ื™ ืื•ื”ื‘ืช ืœืงืจื•ื ื•ืœื›ืชื•ื‘ ืžื›ืชื‘ื™ื, ืื ื™ ืžืชื›ื•ื•ื ืช, ืืžื™ืชื™ื™ื, ืฉื›ืชื•ื‘ื™ื ืขืœ ื”ื ื™ื™ืจ. ื™ืฉ ื‘ืžื›ืชื‘ื™ื ื”ืืœื” ื™ื•ืชืจ ืžืฉืžืขื•ืช ื•ื—ืžื™ืžื•ืช. ืืชื ื–ื•ื›ืจื™ื ืืช ื”ืชืงื•ืคื” ื”ื–ืืช, ื›ืฉืื ื—ื ื• ื”ืœื›ื ื• ืœื“ื•ืืจ ื›ื“ื™ ืœืงื‘ืœ ืืช ื”ืžื›ืชื‘ ืžื—ื‘ืจ ืงืจื•ื‘, ืคืชื—ื ื• ืืช ื”ืžืขื˜ืคื”, ืงืจืื ื• ืืช ื”ืžื›ืชื‘ ื›ืžื” ืคืขืžื™ื, ื—ืฉื‘ื ื• "ืžื” ืœื›ืชื•ื‘ ื‘ื—ื–ืจื”". ืœื ื”ื™ื™ื ื• ืฆืจื™ื›ื™ื ืœืขื ื•ืช ื‘ืื•ืชื• ื”ื™ื•ื. ื”ื™ื” ืœื ื• ื–ืžืŸ ืœื—ืฉื•ื‘, ืœืฉืงื•ืœ. ืื– ืžื” ืขืœ ื’ืœื™ื•ืช? ืื ื™ ื—ื•ืฉื‘ืช ืฉื–ื” ื“ื‘ืจ ืžื™ื•ื—ื“. ืื ืืชื ืœื ืจื•ืฆื™ื ืœื›ืชื•ื‘ ื”ืจื‘ื” , ื–ื” ืคืฉื•ื˜ ื•ืงืœ ืœืงื ื•ืช ืžืฉื”ื• ืงื˜ืŸ ื•ื™ืคื”, ืœื›ืชื•ื‘ ื›ืžื” ืžื™ืœื™ื ื—ืžื™ื ื•ืœืฉืœื•ื— ืืช ื–ื” ืœืžืฉืคื—ื” ืื• ืœืงืจื•ื‘ื™ื.

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๐Ÿ“ฎืžื›ืชื‘ื™ื โœ‰

ื‘ื›ื ื•ืช, ืื ื™ ืื•ื”ื‘ืช ืœืงืจื•ื ื•ืœื›ืชื•ื‘ ืžื›ืชื‘ื™ื, ืื ื™ ืžืชื›ื•ื•ื ืช, ืืžื™ืชื™ื™ื, ืฉื›ืชื•ื‘ื™ื ืขืœ ื”ื ื™ื™ืจ. ื™ืฉ ื‘ืžื›ืชื‘ื™ื ื”ืืœื” ื™ื•ืชืจ ืžืฉืžืขื•ืช ื•ื—ืžื™ืžื•ืช. ืืชื ื–ื•ื›ืจื™ื ืืช ื”ืชืงื•ืคื” ื”ื–ืืช, ื›ืฉืื ื—ื ื• ื”ืœื›ื ื• ืœื“ื•ืืจ ื›ื“ื™ ืœืงื‘ืœ ืืช ื”ืžื›ืชื‘ ืžื—ื‘ืจ ืงืจื•ื‘, ืคืชื—ื ื• ืืช ื”ืžืขื˜ืคื”, ืงืจืื ื• ืืช ื”ืžื›ืชื‘ ื›ืžื” ืคืขืžื™ื, ื—ืฉื‘ื ื• "ืžื” ืœื›ืชื•ื‘ ื‘ื—ื–ืจื”". ืœื ื”ื™ื™ื ื• ืฆืจื™ื›ื™ื ืœืขื ื•ืช ื‘ืื•ืชื• ื”ื™ื•ื. ื”ื™ื” ืœื ื• ื–ืžืŸ ืœื—ืฉื•ื‘, ืœืฉืงื•ืœ. ืื– ืžื” ืœื’ื‘ื™ ื’ืœื•ื™ื•ืช? ืื ื™ ื—ื•ืฉื‘ืช ืฉื–ื” ื“ื‘ืจ ืžื™ื•ื—ื“. ืื ืืชื ืœื ืจื•ืฆื™ื ืœื›ืชื•ื‘ ื”ืจื‘ื” , ื–ื” ืคืฉื•ื˜ ื•ืงืœ ืœืงื ื•ืช ืžืฉื”ื• ืงื˜ืŸ ื•ื™ืคื”, ืœื›ืชื•ื‘ ื›ืžื” ืžื™ืœื™ื ื—ืžื•ืช ื•ืœืฉืœื•ื— ืืช ื–ื” ืœืžืฉืคื—ื” ืื• ืœืงืจื•ื‘ื™ื.

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Hi Phil! I am so happy to hear that. I thought, my writing wouldn't be interesting for discussion. I wrote here just because teachers and native speakers can show me my mistakes. If you say so, I will write there too. You made my day)
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ื“ื™ืื ื”, ืืช ื›ื•ืชื‘ืช ืžืžืฉ ื˜ื•ื‘ ื‘ืขื‘ืจื™ืช. ืœืžื” ืืช ืœื ืžืคืจืกืžืช ืืช ื–ื” ื›ื—ื•ื˜ ื“ื™ื•ืŸ? ื›ื•ืœื ื• ืฉืœื•ืžื“ื™ื ืืช ื”ืฉืคื” ื–ืงื•ืงื™ื ืœื—ื•ื˜ื™ ื“ื™ื•ืŸ ืžืขื ื™ื™ื ื™ื ื›ืžื• ื–ื” ืฉื‘ื”ื ื›ื•ืœื ื• ื™ื›ื•ืœื™ื ืœื”ืฉืชืชืฃ. ื™

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