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I writing to you in regards to the possible presentation of one my projects in the philosophy of the city conference. I have made a video essay about traditional market in Colombia that it has been presented in some conferences and art exibitions. I have taken the liberty of sending the abstract and a link with the video essay. Maybe, you could tell if it is a good idea to send it to the conference. However, Travel expenses are over my budget, I can not afford to travel. if the video-essay were accepted I could instead do a video-conference or a Q&A.
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Can you help me with this paragraph?
I am writing to you regarding the possible presentation of one my projects at the "Philosophy of the city" conference. I have made a video essay about traditional market in Colombia that has been presented at some conferences and art exhibitions. I have taken the liberty of sending the abstract and a link with the video essay. Perhaps, you could tell me if it is a good idea to send it to the conference. However, Travel expenses are over my budget, I can not afford to travel. if the video-essay were accepted I could instead do a video-conference or a Q&A.
Your writing was generally very good. I am English, not American so things may be different in "American English". But this is fine now in real English
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