新型冠状病毒
现在在西班牙虽然在新闻我们看很多关于新型冠状病毒消息，但是欧洲人还不担心。只华人紧张。这个周末华人会打算了过年的活动。然而活动把取消了。中国孩子们的汉语学习补习班也都取消了。也许这里的华人太紧张。他们跟亲戚聊天，看网络社会媒体。
我佩服中国反应冠状病毒的危机。很快积极的反应。我怀疑在西方那么大的解决是不可能的。我希望这个病毒尽早把解决了。
In Spain at the moment although there is a lot of news about the corona virus, the Europeans aren’t worried. Only the Chinese are worried. This weekend the Chinese community had planned to have a new year celebration but it was cancelled. Chinese children’s after school Chinese classes have also been cancelled. Maybe the Chinese are too nervous. They speak to relatives and read social media.
I admire the Chinese response to the crisis. A very fast and active response. I doubt that in the west such a quick response would be possible. I hope this illness is solved soon.
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新型冠状病毒
虽然现在在西班牙虽然在新闻我们看播報很多很多关于新型冠状病毒的新闻消息，但是欧洲人並还不担心。只有华人才紧张。这个周末，华人本來有会打算了过年的慶祝活动，。後來又取消了。中国孩子们的汉语学习补习班也都取消停課了。也许这里的华人太紧张了。他们會跟亲戚們聊天，看网络社会媒体(or社群媒体) 。
我很佩服中国人反应對冠状病毒的危机反应，快速又积极。很快积极的反应。我覺得怀疑在西方人對這種事是不會那麼快做出反應的那么大的解决是不可能的。我希望可以尽早解决这个病毒尽早把解决了。
In Spain at the moment although there is a lot of news about the corona virus, the Europeans aren’t worried. Only the Chinese are worried. This weekend the Chinese community had planned to have a new year celebration but it was cancelled. Chinese children’s after school Chinese classes have also been cancelled. Maybe the Chinese are too nervous. They speak to relatives and read social media.
I admire the Chinese response to the crisis. A very fast and active response. I doubt that in the west such a quick response would be possible. I hope this illness is solved soon.
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感谢外国友人的关心。
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新型冠状病毒
现在在西班牙虽然在新闻我们看(到)很多关于新型冠状病消息(的新闻)，但是欧洲人还不担心。只华人紧张。这个周末华人会打算了过年的活动（原打算举行过年的活动）。然而活动把（ 被）取消了。中国孩子们的汉语学习补习班也都取消了。也许这里的华人太紧张。他们跟亲戚聊天，看网络社会（社交）媒体。
我佩服中国反应冠状病毒的危机（对冠状病毒危机的反应）。（，）很快（很）积极的反应。我怀疑在西方那么大的解决（那么迅速的反应）是不可能的。我希望这个病毒尽早把（被）解决（消灭）了。
In Spain at the moment although there is a lot of news about the corona virus, the Europeans aren’t worried. Only the Chinese are worried. This weekend the Chinese community had planned to have a new year celebration but it was cancelled. Chinese children’s after school Chinese classes have also been cancelled. Maybe the Chinese are too nervous. They speak to relatives and read social media.
I admire the Chinese response to the crisis. A very fast and active response. I doubt that in the west such a quick response would be possible. I hope this illness is solved soon.
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感谢 你对中国新型冠状病毒的关注！
文中有几个小的问题：
- 看到关于……的新闻more typical than "在新闻看到关于……的消息"。
- 会打算了…… should be changed to "原打算举行……", because "原"indicate “before”
- “反应冠状病毒危机” should be changed to "对冠状病毒危机的反应“， because it is the structure of "对……的反应"
- ”那么大的解决” should be changed to "那么迅速的反应"
- "把" 和“被”的用法。
sb.+把+sth.+V.+other
sth.+被+sb.+V.+other
活动被取消了
我希望这个病毒尽早被消灭了.
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新型冠状病毒
虽然现在在西班牙新闻中，我们看到很多关于新型冠状病毒消息，但是欧洲人并不担心。只有华人比较紧张。这个周末，华人社区原本打算举办过年的庆祝活动，但他们又把活动取消了。另外，中国孩子们的汉语课后补习班也都被取消了。也许这里的华人太紧张了，他们只跟他们的亲戚聊天，看一些网络社会媒体。
我佩服中国对冠状病毒危机的反应。很快很积极的反应。我怀疑在西方是不可能做出如此快速反应的。我希望尽快解决这个病毒问题。
In Spain at the moment although there is a lot of news about the corona virus, the Europeans aren’t worried. Only the Chinese are worried. This weekend the Chinese community had planned to have a new year celebration but it was cancelled. Chinese children’s after school Chinese classes have also been cancelled. Maybe the Chinese are too nervous. They speak to relatives and read social media.
I admire the Chinese response to the crisis. A very fast and active response. I doubt that in the west such a quick response would be possible. I hope this illness is solved soon.
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I am very glad to your attitude about the corona virus.Yes,although now our country faces "a difficult war",but The Chinese government has the ability and confidence to win this war.On this event we also find many problems,in the future we will be better and better. Thanks
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