Unit 16 of my son
Hello everyone, today I write about My mother's day trip. She go with her school. She go at 5 o’clock. At 8 o’clock, she is in a garden. This garden has many roses. The roses have many colors, it can red, pink,
white or black. She go around the garden with her friend to taking any photo. It so beautiful. She like it, she talk in this garden in a long time. At 9:30 am is the time she go to the next new place. She very happy because she can take many photos in here. Thank you very much for read my post. Goodbye and good night.
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Unit 16 of my son
Hello everyone, today I write about Mmy mother's day trip. She goes with her school. She goes at 5 o’clock. At 8 o’clock, she is in a garden. This garden has many roses. The roses have many colors: , it can red, pink,
white or black. She goes around the garden with her friend to take ing any photos. It is so beautiful. She likes it, she talks in this garden in for a long time. At 9:30 am is the time she goes to the next new place. She is very happy because she can take many photos in there. Thank you very much for reading my post. Goodbye and good night.
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She goes to school. She leaves at 5 o'clock. (...) That garden has many roses. Roses have many colors, they are red, pink, white or black. She walks around the garden with her friend to make some some photos. (..) She likes it. Then they talked in the garden for long time. At 9.30 am she goes to next place. She is very happy because she can takes many photos. My version...
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