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experience the bitter of lacking water An Experience of Not Having Drinking Water.
Yesterday, my kettle was broken in result of the due to excessive use. To make matters worse, it is too hot to go out to buy some bottled drinking water. However, a person have needs to drink at least 2 to 3 litres of water one a day. So it's is not until night time that the rest of the bit last drop of water was used up. not a drop left. As what was expected, last night have been was the longest night I have spend in my life that I was without any drinking water.This morning, all I can do is to wait for the water supply waiter person to come.To my disappointment, he was not didn't come until the here by noon and so I called the person again .what he told me The person was really surprising surprised that he was waiting for my call the whole morning as he couldn't not call get through my line. I almost fainted! The moment the bottled water was carried to my house home ,I drinked drank a big cup of water. I really want to say ,water is really terrific.My, my, the water sure tasted terrific.
Your punctuation spacing is all wrong. See http://www.italki.com/knowledge/page/Mechanics%20Of%20The%20English%20Language.htm
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