JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON January 21st
I would like someone to correct my diary (or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be happy even if you JUST CORRECT my entry). Here, I might write in spoken English, possibly, because I want to improve not just my writing skills, but also the skill of spoken English. Could do that for me, please?
JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON January 21st
I am writing a diary here for the first time in roughly two months. I have experienced a lot of things since I posted my last diary. Nothing to say, in my job, I was so hectic that I couldn't take sleep enough and since the new year 2020 begun, I was dedicated to do my job of course. So what did I do seriously for the holiday off-work? It is really common to enjoy the holiday very much, just 3 days taken though, even if I did my job since Christmas Day last year to the beginning New year. Yes actually I was always playing Video game, Pokemon on Nintendo Switch. I figured that this new Pokemon video game is desighed for adults, of course for children too. However, like me who played first Pokemon game, Red or Green, is more enjoyed it. In this video game, we don't need to spend much time to strengthen my precious Pokemon, thanks to this change, we can enjoy it for the short time. That's why this time pokemon game is designed for adult who be busy with themselves work. I love it.
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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON January 21st
I would like someone to correct my diary (or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be happy even if you JUST CORRECT my entry). Here, I might write in spoken English, possibly, because I want to improve not just my writing skills, but also the skill of spoken English. Could do that for me, please?
JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON January 21st
I am writing a diary here for the first time in roughly two months. I have experienced a lot of things since I posted my last diary. Nothing to say, in my job, I My job was so hectic that I couldn't takeget enough sleep enough and since the new year 2020 has begun, I was dedicated to do my job of course. So what did I do seriously for the holiday off-work? It is really common to enjoy the holiday very much, just 3 days were taken though, even if I did have done my job since Christmas Day last year to the beginning of the New year. Yes actually I was always playing Video games, such as Pokemon on Nintendo Switch. I figured that this new Pokemon video game is designed for adults, and of course for children too. However, like me who played the first Pokemon game, Red or Green, is more enjoyed it enjoyable. In this video game, we don't need to spend much time to strengthen my precious Pokemon, thanks to this change, we can enjoy it for the short a shorter time. That's why this time new pokemon game is designed for adults who be busy with themselves with work. I love it.
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Vanessa Thank you very much, your is really helpful.
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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON January 21st (writing abut New pokemon game) am writing in my diary here for the first time in roughly two months. I have experienced a lot of things since I posted my last diary. Nothing to say, in my job, I was so hectic that I couldn't take sleep enough and since 2020 has begun, I was dedicated to do my job of course. So what did I do seriously for the holiday off-work? Like most people, I enjoyed my holiday, but I took three days annual eave and I worked from Christmas Day until the new year. I spent a lot of time playing Pokemon on Nintendo Switch. I figured that this new Pokemon video game is designed for adults as well as children, of course for children too. However, whoever, like me, played the first Pokemon game, Red or Green, would enjoy it more. In this video game, we don't need to spend much time strengthening my precious Pokemon and, thanks to this change, we can get to the enjoyable part of the game more quickly. That's why this time pokemon game is designed for adults who might be busy working adults who have less time available. I love it.
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Hi Taichi
I hope this is helpful, please let me know if I went down the wrong path! 😁
Well done for writing in your diary ☺️
... writing a diary entry Or writing in my diary
... my job was so hectic that I couldn’t get enough sleep since the new year 2020 began OR since 2020 has begun (if I were writing this I would have shorter sentences)
Like most people, I enjoyed my holiday, but I only took three days annual leave and I worked from Christmas Day until the new year. I spent a lot of time playing Pokemon on Nintendo switch.
.... designed for adults as well as children.
Whoever, like me, played the first Pokemon game, Red or Green, would enjoy it (this game) more.
... much time strengthening my precious Pokemon and, thanks to this change, we can get to the enjoyable part of the game more quickly (? Is that what you mean).
... the Pokemon game is designed for adults who are busy at work / who might be busy working / working adults who have less time available
Can somebody do that for me please?
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