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A bit about Gatsby Last Christmas I read the novel “The Great Gatsby”, which was written by F. Scott Fitzgerald in 1925. This novel ended up to become in a classic book of the American literature. This drama, about the hight society in the 20s, leads us trought a lovey history at a splendid time in the city of New Yor, as well as a society plenty of unequal social differences, beside to their different lifestiles. The author mixed violence and love, infidelities and friendship, luxury and poverty, with the purpose of transfer us to a fictional place in West and East Eggs, in front of Long Island, in a suffocanting and scorching summer. The protagonist of this history are Jay Gastby, an eccentric millionaire, and Daisy, a depressed and bored young wife who lives in the other side of the bay with her rude husband. They were ex lovers before the First World War separate them. The plot is told by a third person, Nick Carraway, a young graduate who rents a modest house next door to the magnificent Gatsby mansion. Here there are asthonishing parties every Saturday night and Nick introduce us to other characters, always with the biased point of view, as finnally they turn into the best and friends.

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A bit about Gatsby

Last Christmas I read the novel “The Great Gatsby”, which was written by F. Scott Fitzgerald in 1925. This novel ended up becoming to become in a classic book of the in American literature.

This drama, about the hight society in the 20s, leads us through trought a lovey history at a splendid time in the city of New York, as well as a society with plenty of unequal social differences, beside to their different and lifestyles lifestiles. The author mixed violence and love, infidelities and friendship, luxury and poverty, with the purpose of transferring us to a fictional place on in West and East Eggs, in front of Long Island, in a suffocanting and scorching summer.

The protagonists of this history are Jay Gatsby, an eccentric millionaire, and Daisy, a depressed and bored young wife who lives on the other side of the bay with her rude husband. They were ex lovers before the First World War separated them. The plot is narrated told by a third person, Nick Carraway, a young graduate who rents a modest house next door to the magnificent Gatsby mansion. Here there are asthonishing parties every Saturday night and Nick introduces us to other characters, always with a the biased point of view, as finnally they turn into the best and friends.
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The Great Gatsby

This past Christmas, I read the novel, The Great Gatsby, which was written by F. Scott Fitzgerald in 1925. This novel, despite its excesses, or perhaps due to them, eventually ended up becoming a “classic” within American literature. Its theme, set within the High Society of New York City during “The Roaring Twenties,” examines and comments upon that period’s unequal social differences, as well as their members vastly different lifestyles. The author mixes violence and love, infidelities and friendship, luxury and poverty, with the purpose of transferring us to the fictional places of West and East Egg, in front of Long Island, during a suffocating and scorching summer.

The main protagonists of this story are Jay Gatsby, an eccentric millionaire, and Daisy, a depressed and bored young wife who lives on the other side of the bay, along with her rude husband, Tom. Jay and Daisy had been lovers before the First World War cruelly separated them. A third person, Nick Carraway, a young graduate, who lives in a modest, rented house next door to the magnificent Gatsby mansion, tells the narrative to us. He gives us a bird’s eye view of the magnificent, if not astonishing parties that Gatsby gives every Saturday night, as well as introducing us to other characters, yet, always with a somewhat biased point of view, as eventually, due to their shared backgrounds, he and Gatsby turn into the best of friends. At its end, somewhat unsurprisingly, tragedy strikes, affecting everyone in one form or another, while shattering Nick’s illusions of the life, and the place, that he had aspired to reach.*

Hi, Legat. Good job! Whatever changes I made were to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify your thoughts, and for ease of reading. My sincerest apologies if I have misinterpreted. I hope that this helps you, Jonathan.

*While not incorrect, the preference is for titles to be italicized instead. Given that your post ended somewhat abruptly, without any sort of resolution, I took the liberty of adding one. While it is a nice review, you could have easily added another paragraph telling us how you felt about it. Regardless of whether we are familiar with the book or not, simply knowing what your impressions about it are, might have interested us even more. (*-^)
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A Bit about Gatsby

Last Christmas I read the novel “The Great Gatsby”, which was written by F. Scott Fitzgerald in 1925. This novel ended up to becoming in a classic book of the in American literature.

This drama, about the hight society in the 20s, leads us through a lovely history at a splendid time in the city of New York, as well as a society with plenty of unequal social differences, besides to their different lifestyles. The author mixed violence and love, infidelities and friendship, and luxury and poverty, for with the purpose of transferring us to a fictional place in West and East Eggs, in front of Long Island, in a suffocating, scorching summer.

The protagonist of this history are Jay Gatsby, an eccentric millionaire, and Daisy, a depressed and bored young wife who lives on in the other side of the bay with her rude husband. They were ex-lovers before the First World War separated them. The plot is told by a third person, Nick Carraway, a young graduate who rents a modest house next door to the magnificent Gatsby mansion. Here, there are astonishing parties every Saturday night and Nick introduces us to other characters, always with a the biased point of view, as finally they turn into the best of and friends.

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I would suggest watching on a cold winter afternoon ;-)
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I only watched the film and I don't like Daisy at all!She is so shallow and peacockish. The actress is also not pretty enough to me. I can't understand the story!

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