The value of art
Art is maybe as old as human history. Even Prehistoric people used to make drawings on walls showing scenes from their daily life. In the following years art split into clear categories and trends. For example in painting, there are artists that follow the trend of expressionism when others follow the abstract style. Amid all these trends and categories of art someone could ask what is the role that art plays for us. Is the meaning of art similar to the meaning of the previous years? Surely, for the most of us, art is a way to describe our life in a different way maybe more colorful and with more freedom. Also it is a way to relax and develop our creativity. I could imagine our ancestors relaxing from their hard daily life in the same way!
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The value of art
Art is maybe as old as human history. Even Prehistoric people cavemen used to make drawings on walls showing ('depicting') scenes from their daily life. In the following years art split into clear ('defined') categories and trends. For example in painting, there are artists that follow the trend of expressionism, when while others follow the abstract style. Amid all these trends and categories of art someone could ask what is question the role that art plays for us. Is the meaning of art now similar to the its meaning of the in previous years? Surely, for the most of us, art is a way to describe our life in a different way - maybe ('perhaps') more colorful and with more freedom. Also It is also a way to relax and develop our creativity. I could imagine our ancestors relaxing from their hard daily life in the same way!
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Well done! A few quick notes:
- the word 'prehistoric' tends to describe objects or societies in general, so I substituted 'cavemen' as I think it still makes sense in the context
- the words in purple make sense but I've provided some alternatives that make the writing seem more formal
- in spoken English a lot of people start sentences with 'also', but in written/formal English I would put it later in the sentence
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