Differences between BA and RJ
My hometown is Rio de Janeiro, one of the twenty-seven states in Brazil, in South America. I was born there and I moved to Buenos Aires, capital of Argentina, many years ago, when I was a grow-up woman, because I wanted to study Spanish in Argentina. Due of my knowledge from these cities, I will show you the differences between both cities.
Rio de Janeiro has a lot of beaches, Many mountains that you can do hiking or anything whatever you want related to nature. I think this is the most interesting in my hometown. In other hands, unfortunately, we don't have a lot of libraries or bookstores, so I think they aren't used to learn normally. At the end, our criminal rate is expanding because it exists social inequality.
How I said before, a Iived in Buenos Aires before and I loved this city. It was a best time in my life and if I could come back, I'd did. Buenos Aires has a mistery air, a good arquitecture and a lof of culture programs. People are so friendly and after many years living in many places, the thing more important to me is people's behavior, like to be nice, pleasant etc. But we have problems there too, the crime rate is increasing because they have problems with the economy, in order to increase their social inequality, unfortunately.
In summarize, if I need to choose a place for living, it will be Buenos Aires.
I would appreciate if someone could correct my text, please
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My hometown is the city of Rio de Janeiro, in the state of the same name. It is one of the twenty-seven states in Brazil, in South America. I was born there and I moved to Buenos Aires, the capital of Argentina, many years ago, when I was a grown woman, because I wanted to study Spanish in Argentina. Using my knowledge of these cities, I will point out to you some differences between the two.
Rio de Janeiro has a lot of beaches, and many mountains where you can go hiking or do anything you want related to nature. I think this is the most interesting thing about my hometown. On the other hand, unfortunately, they don't have a lot of libraries or bookstores. Finally, the crime rate is growing because of the social inequality that exists there.
As I said before, I lived in Buenos Aires previously and I loved the city. It was one of the best times in my life and if I could go back, I'd do it. Buenos Aires has an air of mystery, good architecture and a lot of cultural programs. People are so friendly and after many years living in many places, the most important thing to me is people's behavior, like being nice, pleasant etc. But there are problems there too, the crime rate is increasing because they have problems with their economy which, unfortunately, is increasing social inequality.
In summary, if I needed to choose a place to live, it would be Buenos Aires.
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