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the church clock A small village where once had a church clock was used for striking the hours.the all villagers arranged everything according to the bell.one day,but the clock suddenly stoped,the villagers begun to discuss what happend to the bell.the pity is no one could explain why. The next day,the vicar of the village climbed into the clock tower to see what had happened,in the upstairs,the vicar realised to his surprise that the clock had been invaded by bees,the appearance of the clock was full of honey and wax.a queen bee was staying in the center of the bell.some bees were flying come and go around it,the others were crawling slowly on the bell.the vicar was trying to drive them away,but failed it. There is not a better way to let the bees away.so a bee keeper was called,the keeper firstly removed the queen bee by using a special method,the queen bee had no sooner left the bell than the others soon flyed away followed it. the vicar letted someone cleaned the clock and the bell working again.the village returned the normal life.

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                                                    The Church Clock

There was small village, which had a church clock. It would strike a bell on the hour. The all villagers arranged everything according to the toll of the bell. However one day the clock suddenly stopped and the bell rang no more. The villagers begun to discuss what happened to the clock. No one could explain what was wrong with the clock.


The next day. The vicar of the village climbed the stairs into the clock tower to see what had happened. The vicar realized to his surprise that the clock had been invaded by bees; the appearance of the clock was full of wax and honey. A queen bee was staying in the center of the bell. Some bees were flying around. Some would come and go around it; and the others were crawling slowly on the bell. The vicar was trying to drive them away, but failed it.


There is a better way to get the bees away from the clock. A bee keeper was called. The keeper firstly removed the queen bee by using a special method. The queen bee had no sooner left the bell then the others soon followed it.
The vicar let someone cleaned the clock and the bell working again. The village returned the normal life.

 

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The Church Clock.

In a small village, where there was once had a church clock which was used for striking the hours (or: telling the time). The all villagers arranged everything according to the bell (or: according to when the clock bells chimed). One day, but the clock suddenly stopped, and so the villagers began to discuss what happened to the bell it. the pity is Unfortunately, no one could explain why it stopped (or: what happened to it). 
The next day, the vicar of the village climbed into the clock tower to see what had happened. in the Upstairs, the vicar realised, to his surprise, that the clock had been invaded by bees. The appearance of The clock was full of honey and wax (or: the clock appeared to be full of honey and wax). A queen bee was staying in the center of the bell. Some bees were flying come and go around it, the and others were crawling slowly on the bell. The vicar was trying to drive them away, but he failed. it. 
There is not a no better way to let the bees away get rid of the bees, so a bee keeper was called. The keeper firstly removed the queen bee by using through (this just sounds better - 'by using' is also fine) a special method. The queen bee had no sooner left the bell, than and the others soon flyed away followed it. 
The vicar letted let someone cleaned the clock, and afterwards, the bell began working again. The village returned the normal life back to normal.

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The Church Clock

A small village once had a church clock that was used for striking the hours.  All the villagers arranged everything according to the bell.  One day the clock suddenly stopped.  The villagers began to discuss what happened to the bell.  It was a pity that no one could explain why.
The next day,the vicar of the village climbed into the clock tower to see what had happened.  While upstairs,the vicar realised to his surprise that the clock had been invaded by bees.  The clock was full of honey and wax. A queen bee was living in the center of the bell.  Some bees were flying to and from it.  The others were crawling slowly on the bell.  The vicar was trying to drive them away, but failed.
There was not a better way to get the bees away, so the bee keeper was called.  The keeper firstly removed the queen bee by using a special method.  The queen bee left the bell and the others flew away following her.
The vicar had someone clean the clock and got the bell working again.  The village returned to their normal life.

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