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Santa Clause We went to a shopping mall last weekend. In America, Santa Claus shows up at any shopping mall and we can take a picture with him. Even in Japan, Santa Clause shows up at preschool or children’s center. It is funny but oftentimes they don’t look very real, they are skinny, we can see their black hair under the white hair wig, it is obvious that they are wearing a false mustache, etc..But the Santa Clause we met looked really Santa Clause. He was a portly, has a real white hair and a mustache. It was a first time for my daughter to meet a real Santa Clause. So when she met him, she was so excited. The Santa Clause gently hugged her and talked her something. It was a nice experience for her.

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We went to a shopping mall last weekend. In America, Santa Claus shows up at any every shopping mall and we can take a our (2) picture with him. Even in Japan, Santa Clause shows up at preschool or children’s centers. It is funny but oftentimes they don’t look very real., They are skinny, we can see their black hair under the white hair wig, and it is obvious that they are wearing a false mustache, etc..But the Santa Clause we met looked like the really Santa Clause. He was a portly, has a had real white hair and a mustache. It was a the first time for my daughter to meet met a real Santa Clause. So when she met him, she was so excited. The Santa Clause gently hugged her and talked to her something. It was a nice experience for her.

1) Santa Claus the name is spelled without an e on the end.
A legal clause is spelled using an e.
2) We can take a picture with him. This is correct, but for some reason it sounds a little strange. Using "our" sounds better to me.

Sounds like you found a good Santa. Some that wear fake beards and mustaches can look very convincing. There are some that look exactly like the real thing, with white beards, mustaches, a plump belly and all.

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