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Hi Agela,
Rita is one of my best friends and I think she is a suitable person to be an au pair in your family. She is 26 and she graduated in English philology, so her English is on the good level. She ist currently working at the literary museum, but what she is doing there is a distant work on the museum website content, therefore it would't be a problem for her to go to the US.
Rita is charming girl and she's also very sensitive to what other people need, that's why I think she can get along easily with children, even not having younger siblings in her family.
In her free time Rita likes reading (mostly poetry) and watching series (she is a great fan of Game of Thrones). She is independent and it's not problem for her to be sometimes alone and do things on her own.
The only negative moment is that Rita is a little bit disorganized and it can be difficult for her follow the schedule all the time. But, as I already have mentioned, she is very nice person and I'm sure you will like her.
All the best,
Anna
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Please correct my text
Hi Agela,
Rita is one of my best friends and I think she is a suitable person to be an au pair in your family. She is 26 and she graduated in English Philology, so her English level is good. She ist currently working at the Literary museum, but what she is doing there is a distant work on the museum website content, therefore it would't be a problem for her to go to the US.
Rita is a charming girl and she's also very sensitive to what other people need, that's why I think she can get along easily with children, even if she hasn’t got any younger siblings in her family.
In her free time Rita likes reading (mostly poetry) and watching series (she is a great fan of Game of Thrones). She is independent and it's not a problem for her to stay sometimes alone and do things on her own.
The only negative aspect is that Rita is a little bit disorganized and it can be difficult for her to follow a schedule. But, as I have already explained, she is a very nice person and I'm sure you will like her.
All the best,
Anna
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Please correct my text
Hi Agela,
Rita is one of my best friends and I think she is a suitable person to be an au pair in your family. She is 26 and she graduated with a degree in (?) English philology, so her English is at a good level. She is currently working at the literary museum, but what she is doing there is a distance work on the museum's website content, therefore it would't be a problem for her to go to the US.
Rita is charming girl and she's also very sensitive to what other people need, that's why I think she can get along easily with children, even though she had no younger siblings in her family.
In her free time Rita likes reading (mostly poetry) and watching tv series (she is a great fan of Game of Thrones). She is independent and it's not problem for her to be alone sometimes and do things on her own.
The only negative comment is that Rita is a little bit disorganized and it can be difficult for her follow the schedule all the time. But, as I already have mentioned, she is very nice person and I'm sure you will like her.
All the best,
Anna
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