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Suggestions about how to Quit Smoking Dear Bob, How is everything going? You have asked for my advice on how to stop smoking and I will spare no efforts to make suggestions. Here are a few suggestions about how to quit smoking. First and foremost, it is important to stay away from those people who are particularly fond of smoking constantly. In the second place, it also helps to develop a good habit, such as arranging flowers, going to the concert, joining the public square dancing. Last but not least, it is a wise idea to drop it gradually. I hope you will find my suggestions effective. I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Yours, Li Hua

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Suggestions about how to Quit Smoking

Dear Bob,
How is everything going? You have asked for my advice on how to stop smoking and I will spare no efforts*1 to make suggestions.
Here are a few suggestions about how to quit smoking. First and foremost, it is important to stay away from those people who are particularly fond of smoking constantly. In the second place, it also helps to develop a good habits, such as arranging flowers, going to the concerts, joining the public square dancing. Last but not least, it is a wise idea to drop*2 it gradually.
I hope you will find my suggestions effective.

I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua


*1 'spare no efforts' sounds a little excessive for this context. I might say 'do my best'
*2 'drop' sounds colloquial but is acceptable. In this context it would be a good place to use the phrasal verb.
'give up' which is the most usual expression.

Impressive use of expressions.

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