Moj novi hitni kontakt, Maaarko!
Izvini, Mama!
Danas potpišao sam novi ugovor za rado, i na documentaciju morao sam da izaberem hitni kontakt.
U mojoj glavi, nisam bio siguran ako treba bi da ga izaberem, tako na kraju odlučio sam da ga pitam. On je rekao koji: “Bilo bi jedan čast!”
Onda, napravio sam fotografiju dokumenta i poslao sam mu ga, jer je na delu koji kaže “Šta je njihov odnos sa vama?” napišao sam “Muž”. On bio je vrlo srećno :)
Hvala vam!
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Moj novi hitni kontakt za hitne slučajeve - Maaarko!
Izvini, Mmama!
Danas sam potpisšao sam novi ugovor za posaorado, i na u obrascu*u sam morao sam da izaberem hitni kontakt za hitne slučajeve**.
U mojoj glavi nisam bio siguran ako da li bi trebalo bi da ga izaberem njega, tako da sam na kraju odlučio sam da ga pitam. On je rekao koji: “Bilao bi jedan mi čast!”
Hvala vam!
*u obrascu -> Documents needed to be fulfilled (Serbian: to fulfill - popuniti) with information are called "obrazac" (Sg, Nominative), "obrasci" (Pl, Nominative). "Popuniti obrazac" is often used phrase in this context. You can use "dokument", too, but "obrazac za popunjavanje", popuniti obrazac", "(ne)popunjen obrazac"... are often used terms.
** "a personal emergency contact" is in Serbian "kontakt za hitne slučajeve"
***Srodstvo is a term used in Serbian language in the case of emergency if the person is a family member, spouse or similar.
You can type in "obrazac za hitne slučajeve" and most likely you'll stumble upon on "srodstvo" and the empty space that needs to be fulfilled for "a personal emergency contact". If you want to keep the sentence you had already wrote, this sounds better in Serbian, "Kakva je priroda vašeg odnosa?" (English: What is the nature of your relationship?) instead of "Šta je njihov odnos sa vama?"
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Thank you Sina! It’s so kind of you to make these suggestions to me. The cases, and pronouns, are still fairly difficult for me at the moment, but I know I’ll get there eventually. Thanks again for your help.
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Hi Daniel, I am also only learning Serbian therefore, I am not able to correct your text. I just want to let you know that it was perfectly clear to me what you wanted to say.
I would suggest that instead of "hitni kontakt" you use "kontakt za hitni slučaj" (I hope I am right :D -- Also "treba bi da GA izaberem" – it is not clear who or what GA is. It would make it clearer (more understandable) if you wrote e.g. moj /svoj partner /muž / dečko / suprug … (don't forget to write it in the corresponding case.
Much luck and success with your language learning!
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Hi kamenko. Thank you for your correction.
Do you mean that none of the writing is clear/correct? Do you have any suggestion about how to improve it?
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Sorry, I am not sure what are you getting at!
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