Note#3
In this text I want to write about a person who is important for me. There are many people who I may call ‘important person for me’. Of course, this is my family and my friends. But I want to tell about one my friend. Let’s call her Ann. Ann is a true friend. She always helps in any problem. And I’m proud of being her friend.
Ann is kind and creative person. She likes crows, and dogs, and any animals too. She often helps wounded birds. This is a very important thing. In addition, Ann knows how to create beautiful things from plastic and fur.
Unfortunately, we rarely see each other now, as we live in different cities. It's sad, but life is life.
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Note#3
In this text I want to write about a person who is important (to) me. There are many people (that I might) call an ‘important person for me,’ (such as) my family and my friends,(of course). I want to (write) about one my friend(s). Let’s call her Ann. Ann is a true friend. She always helps in any problem. And I’m proud (to be) her friend.
Ann is (a) kind and creative person. She likes crows, and dogs, and any (other) animals (as well) too. She often helps wounded birds (which) is a very important thing. In addition, Ann knows how to create beautiful things from plastic and fur.
Unfortunately, we rarely see each other now, as we live in different cities. It's sad, but life is life.
Here are some possible corrections. Words I added are in (parentheses), and I crossed out a few words. Good Luck Olga!
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