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Today's sentences that i wanted to say to my boss...... That is actually problem that i've always thought about from i start to work in this company. The division of works for different teams makes efficiency, but also causes a disconnection of others. So even it has been no chance to participate in the beginning of project, I've never had confidence of what i designed. Unfortunately, i have no idea how to figure it out.

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That is actually problem that i've always thought about from i start to work in this company.
This is actually a problem that I've always thought about since I started working at this company.

"That" vs "This": That = 저것은, This = 이것은.
"I" 는 항상 대문자 입니다.
"from" vs "since": "from" 은 preposition 이라 명사가 따라와야 합니다. 그래서 "from the time" 이라고도 할수 있지만 더 간단하게 같은 뜻을 가진 "since" 라는 단어로 줄여서 쓰는게 좋아 보입니다.
"start" vs "started": 회사에서 일하기 시작한 시간은 과거이기 때문에 과거형을 사용하셔야 합니다.
"to work" vs "working: "to work" 도 grammar이 틀린것이 아니지만 아직 같은 회사에서 일을 하고 있기 때문에 "working" 이 더 자연스러워 보입니다.
"to work in" vs "to work at": 보통 "to work in" 은 장소나 분야 대해서 말할때 사용합니다. "I work in that building." "I work in the IT industry." 회사를 말할때는 "work at" 을 더 많이 사용합니다. "I work at that company." "I work at my brother's cafe."

The division of works for different teams makes efficiency, but also causes a disconnection of others.
The division of work between different teams increases efficiency, but it also causes disconnection for others.

조금 더 자연스럽게 문장을 바꾸면: Dividing work between teams might be better for efficiency, but it can cause people to feel disconnected from the work.
"일을 팀들간에 나누면 더 효율적일수 있지만, 어떤 사람들에게는 일과 멀어진다고 느껴질수 있습니다."

"work" vs "works": "일" 이라고 말할때 "work"는 plural 도 "work" 입니다. "창작품" 이라고 말할때 "work" 에 plural 은 "works" 입니다. "There is so much work to do" vs "The many works of that director have all received critical acclaim."
"for" vs "between": 팀들 "사이"에서 일을 나누는 것이기 때문에 "between" 이나 "among" 이 더 좋아 보입니다.
"makes" vs "increases": "efficiency" 라는 명사는 셀 수 있는것이 아니기 때문에 "만들다" 보다는 "증가시키다" 가 더 좋아 보입니다.
"but also" vs "but it also": "but also" 를 사용하면 보통 "Not only... but also..." 가 떠올려지기 때문에 처음 문장과 뒤에 오는 문장이 서로 다른 느낌을 줘야 한다면 "but it also" 를 사용하시는게 좋습니다.

So even it has been no chance to participate in the beginning of project, I've never had confidence of what i designed.

죄송하지만 이 문장은 무슨 뜻인지 잘 모르겠습니다.. 한국어로 적어주시면 도와드리겠습니다.

Unfortunately, i have no idea how to figure it out.
Unfortunately, I have no idea how to figure it out.

"I" 대문자 빼고는 문제 없습니다.

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