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My winter vacation plan (I would appreciate it if you can point out my mistakes or provide some expressions you natives will use.) The winter vacation is around the corner. Though in the next two months I will have lots of final tests, I still can’t wait to make my winter vacation plan. This year, I am thinking of going to ski not only because I am always crazy about sports but I really enjoy being surrounded by snow. Every time I got close to the nature, would I be in the most peaceful mood. This trip will last for two weeks. After this trip, the lunar New Year Festival will be not so far away. Then all the people will be busy cleaning the house, arranging the feast and visiting their relatives. But most importantly, it’s a valuable chance for me to accompany my families. After the festival, there must be few days left and it’ll be the time to do some preparations for the next semester including finishing my homework of course. All in all, it will be a wonderful, meaningful and unforgettable winter vacation.

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My Winter Vacation Plan

My winter vacation is around the corner! Over the next two months, even though I will have to take many final tests, I still cannot wait to start making plans for it. This year, I am thinking of going skiing since not only am I crazy about sports, but I also really enjoy having the snow all around me. Anytime that I can be outdoors and get close to nature, I am able to be in the most peaceful of moods. That trip will last for two weeks, and after it ends, the lunar New Year Festival will not be so far away. Then, everybody will be busy cleaning the house, arranging for a feast, and visiting relatives. Most importantly, it is a valuable chance for me to be with my family. After the festival, there will be few open days left, and it will be the perfect time to prepare for the next semester including, of course, finishing my homework. Overall, I imagine, as well as hope, that it will be a wonderful, meaningful and unforgettable winter vacation.*

Hi, Jerry. Good job! Whatever changes I made were to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify your thoughts, and for ease of reading. My sincerest apologies if I have misinterpreted. I hope that this helps you. Jonathan.

*Best wishes for your vacation plans coming true! 



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