Thought about the history of "Dating"
This video is talked about "dating" , and in my mind, it present the process of people fighting for freedom, especially as a women living in a men power social.
In a long time, a women can't love with a men without her family's agreement, also she will be punished in a mentally and physically ways, if she got divorced. Even today, there still exists a punishment named "honor killing" in some religious country. Men has the same situation, people are treated as a source, not a human.
People want take back the control of themself. They start to responsible for their own feeling and body, they respect different grown path of each other, as a reward, people get the freedom choice between love and not love, love with the same gender and the different gender. Actually, system of marriage has a huge revolution accompanied by the development of the times, divorce is allowed, cohabitation partner also have a legal validity in some country and open relationship is also possible in a marriage.
Refer to this fact, I have a positive prediction about the future, we won't stay with somebody just follow the command of AI. We can't live as a living machine, love and the willing inside ourself is the most important.
After all, the meaning of <1984> is to warn us, not teach us as a manual.
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Thoughts about the history of "Dating"
This video is talks about "dating", and in my mind, it represents the process of people fighting for freedom, especially as a women living in a men power social patriarchal society.
People want to take back the control of themselves. They start to by being responsible for their own feelings and bodies, they and respecting each other's different growth paths of each other, and as a reward, people get the freedom of choice between love and not love, love with the same gender and the a different gender. Actually, the system of marriage has had a huge revolution accompanied by the development of the times; divorce is allowed, cohabitation partners also have a legal validity in some countries, and an open relationship is also possible in a marriage.
Referring to these facts, I have a positive prediction about the future that we won't stay with somebody just following the commands of AI. We can't live as a living machines; Love and the willing inside ourselves are the most important things. After all, the meaning purpose of 1984 is to warn us, not to teach us as a manual.
rf: https://www.voicetube.com/videos/70312
Nice essay, Gin! I really liked reading about your thoughts, and you get some complex ideas across with sophisticated language. Most of the errors are just about plural/non plural form, tense agreements, and the use of 'a' or 'the', but they don't get in the way of understanding what you are trying to express.
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