First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm am a junior mayjoring in pychology psychology major in China.  ,and I have a ardent fervent yearning to furthing further my study in the US.  I'm I am now fully engaged in improving my English.  ,besides,I really love to speak English.I and hope that I can attain something meaningful here like making friends,I mean,at the same time, I'd love to what I can to help those who want to learn Chinese.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm a junior mayjoring in pychology in China,and I have a ardent yearning to further my study in the US.I'm now engaged in improving my English,besides,I really love to speak English.I hope I can attain something meaningful here,making friends,I mean,at the same time,I'd love to do what I can to help those who want to learn Chinese.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm a junior, majoring in pychology in China,and I have a ardent yearning to further my studies in the US. I'm now engaged in improving my English,besides. I really love to speak English. I hope I can achieve something meaningful here by making friends. I mean,at the same time,I'd love to do what I can to help those who want to learn Chinese.