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The unusual moon A few days ago I was running in the evening on my usual route. I ran through the park and went down the stairs that lead to the river. While I was getting down, I watched my step careful to not get tripped up. When I had looked up, I suddenly saw a very big moon in the sky that hung over the river. It was huge and had an unnatural orange color! I've never seen such a big moon before! When I returned to the same place the next day, there was not any moon. The sky was clear but a wonderful moon disappeared.

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An Unusual Moon

A few days ago, I was running along my usual evening route, which takes me through the park, and then down a flight of stairs that lead to the river. As I descended those steps, I naturally looked down, and carefully watched my foot placement so that I would not trip. Upon reaching level ground, when I then looked up, I was somewhat startled, and stopped in my tracks, as a very big moon hung in the sky over the river. It was huge, as well as had an unnatural orange color! I do not think that I had ever seen such an enormous moon in my life like that before. Regrettably, while running along that very same route the next evening, there was not any sign of it: the sky above me was both clear and empty, as if that huge, wonderful, and beautifully orange-tinged moon had felt embarrassed and ran away!

Hi, Anna. Good job! Whatever changes I made were to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify your thoughts, and for ease of reading. Sincerest apologies if I have misinterpreted, as well as for changing the ending! I hope that this helps you. Jonathan

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