My favorite city
Bogotá is a interesting city.
It has a big size with moderns and old fashioned buildings.You can see some trees. There are a lot of things to do as to take a walk for the center of city (You will find crazy things and street shows here). The weather is crazy all days but still the view is beautiful and its sky has perfect colors. Maybe is the noisest city of the country but is a city in motion. There are some shopping malls, museums and galleries.
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My favorite city
Bogotá is a interesting city.
It is a big city with both moderns and old fashioned buildings. You can also see some trees. There are a lot of things to do, such as to take a walk toward/into/in the center of city (You will find crazy (surprising?) things and street shows here). The weather is (unpredictable?) every day but still the view is still/regardless beautiful and its sky has perfect colors. There are some shopping malls, museums and galleries. It may be the noisiest city of the country but it is a city in motion.
Most of the above corrections have more to do with style and more natural phrases to express what you want to say. The words in question marks are suggestions to replace "crazy" because in English the meaning can be unclear; we would not usually use "crazy" in those cases. I also switched the order of the last two sentences to end more poetically; the sentence I moved to the end is quite nice (well done!) and I think it adds a feeling of closure. Again, that is more style than grammar or vocabulary, both of which you seem to have grasped fairly well.
Good luck with continuing to learn English! :)
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My favorite city
Bogotá is an interesting city.
It is a big city with both modern and old fashioned buildings.You can see some trees. There are a lot of things to do such as take a walk to the center of the city (you will find crazy things and street shows here). The weather is crazy every day but still the view is beautiful and its sky has perfect colors. It may be the noisiest city in the country, but it is a city in motion. There are a few shopping malls, museums and galleries.
I'd love to visit Bogotá some day! Keep it up!
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