What are some activities you can do during your favorite season? And what is your favorite activity?
"What are some activities you can do during your favorite season? And what is your favorite activity?"
I love going to parks and streets to take a picture of people or scenery in spring, and hanging out with people
Especially I like going to shopping with my friends the best.
They come out easier than winter when weather gets warm.
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What are some activities you can do during your favorite season? And what is your favorite activity?
"What are some activities you can do during your favorite season? And what is your favorite activity?"
I love going to parks and streets to take pictures of people or scenery in spring, and I love hanging out with people. if using "comma - and," both parts of the sentence before and after the comma must be complete sentences with a subject and a predicate. You could also say "I love going to parks and streets to take pictures of people or scenery in spring and hanging out with people"... but it's a long sentence with no comma for a pause, so I agree that adding a comma makes it easier to read. Alternatively, you could break it into two complete sentences with a period and say "I love going to parks and streets to take pictures of people in scenery in spring. I also love to hang out with people."
I might also say "with family/friends" instead of "with people," unless you mean to say that you hang out with strangers as well as people you know. Which is totally fine. :)
I especially like going to shopping with my friends the most.
It is easier to go out (then)/(in spring) when weather gets warm than in winter.
You can also say "the" before the names of seasons, e.g. "the spring" and "the winter."
Good work and good luck with continuing to learn English!
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What are some activities you can do during your favorite season? And what is your favorite activity?
"What are some activities you can do during your favorite season? And what is your favorite activity?"
I love going to parks and streets to take a picture photos of people or scenery in spring, (this comma is important to avoid ambiguity, it is perfect) and or (the 'or' makes photos and hanging out separate activities, 'and' makes them simultaneous) hanging out with people.
They come out easier than winter more willingly when the weather gets warm than in winter.
(That sentence is not so easy to express!)
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