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I'm thinking about my life. I went to New Zealand to study English this year. And now, I want to go back there to prepare for IELTS. However I have some probrems to go. I need to work in school as a teacher until next year. If I would't be a teacher until next year, I couldn't work in Japanese school as a regular teacher. When I was a junior highschool student, I wanted to stay in NZ. I have dreamed to spent my life in there for a long time. Therefore I'm thinking about this.

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I'm thinking about my life.

I went to New Zealand to study English this year and now, I want to go back there to prepare for IELTS. However, I have some problems preventing me from going right now.
I need to work in school as a teacher until next year. If I don't work as a teacher until next year, I can't work in Japanese school as a regular teacher.
When I was a junior high school student, I wanted to stay in New Zealand. I have dreamt of spending my life there for a long time. Therefore, I'm thinking about this.

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I'm thinking about my life.

Earlier this year, I went to New Zealand to study English. And Now, I want to go back there to prepare for my IELTS. However, I have some problems with going: I need to work at my current school as a teacher until next year.

If I would't be don't stay as a teacher until next year, I won't be able to work in Japanese schools as a regular teacher.

"Would" doesn't go in the "if"-phrase. :)

When I was a junior highschool student, I always wanted to live in NZ. I have dreamt of spending my life in there for a long time. Therefore, I'm thinking about considering this seriously.

I hope the corrections help - please feel free to ask if you need any explanation. :)

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Thank you for your message. I will do my best and keep on studying to achieve my dream. Thank you a lot.
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This is not a correction. Just know how you feel..i also have dreamed of going to such a lovely Country. And i know i'll do, although here is sooo far away!, i'll achieve it ;) i wish you the best of luck, and i know you will do too . Do not despair; sometimes choices are difficult, and sometimes you have to attend duties first (in your case seems it's worth it you first finish your education), and then, you'll be free. You're almost there. Cheer up! ^_^ (this is just an opinion of what i would do...)

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