My day
Today weather was not good. It rained all day. I with my little son did not go for a walk and stayed at home. His name is Matthew. Hi stady to walk. It so sweet.
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My day
Today weather was not good. It rained all day. I with my little son did not go for a walk and stayed at home. His name is Matthew. Hi stady to walk. It so sweet.
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Hello Yulia! I offer my corrections below:
Today's weather was not good. It rained all day. I did not go for a walk with my son, and instead, we stayed at home. His name is Matthew. He is starting to walk. It is so sweet.
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My day
Today's weather was not good. It rained all day. I with my little son did not go for a walk with my little son and instead stayed at home. His name is Matthew. Hi stady (unclear meaning here) to walk. It is so sweet.
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My day
Today's weather was not good. It rained all day. I with my little son did not go for a walk with my little son, and (we) stayed at home. His name is Matthew. He has just started stady to walk. It so sweet.
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My Day
Today’s weather was not very good since it rained all day. As a result, my little toddler and I did not go out for a walk like we normally do. Instead, we just stayed nice and dry inside at home. His name is Matthew, and he is just starting to stand and walk by himself. It is so sweet!*
Hi, Yulia. Good job! Whatever changes I made were to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify your thoughts, and for ease of reading. Sincerest apologies if I have misinterpreted. I hope that this helps you. Jonathan
*Good use of the pronouns! With the proper punctuation, a few of your shorter sentences can be combined. Finally, I trust between the three of us (who edited your post…), we collectively caught everything! (*-^) Keep writing and keep posting!
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Hi Yulia
My day
Today the weather was't good. It rained all day so I didn't go for a walk with my little son therefore we stayed at home. His name is Matthew and he stady? (has just started?) to walk. He's so sweet.
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