Blinkist: Notes on a Nervous Planet
There’s no white without black, no good without bad. In the fast-passing world instant-communicaton is a blessing and a curse. Now we have an acces to the world through internet in our pocket and we can reach like-minded people. On the other hand we stay connected 24/7 that leads to stress, depression and other disoders. If we want to leave happy and healthy lives we must be mindful of what we are doing with our gadgets.
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Blinkist: Notes on a Nervous Planet
There’s no white without black, no good without bad. In this fast-paced world, instant-communicaton is a blessing and a curse. We now have an access to the world through the Internet in our pocket and we can reach like-minded people. On the other hand, we stay connected 24/7, which leads to stress, depression and other disorders. If we want to lead happy and healthy lives we must be mindful of what we are doing with our gadgets.
Not too bad, Maria. Note that the Internet is a proper noun, so it has the article "the" and is written with a capital "I"
Access, however, is general, so it doesn't need an article.
I hope this helps. Well done.
Simon.
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Blinkist: Notes on a Nervous Planet
There’s no white without black, no good without bad. In the fast-paced world, instant-communicaton is a blessing and a curse. Now we have access to the world through internet in our pocket and we can reach like-minded people. On the other hand, if we stay connected 24/7 that leads to stress, depression and other disorders. If we want to lead happy and healthy lives we must be mindful of what we are doing with our gadgets.
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Blinkist: Notes on a Nervous Planet
There’s no white without black, no good without bad. In the fast-passing world, instant-communication is a blessing and a curse. Now we have an access to the world through internet in our pocket and we can reach like-minded people. On the other hand, we stay connected 24/7 that which leads to stress, depression and other disorders. If we want to leave happy and healthy lives we must be mindful of what we are doing with our gadgets.
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