The Museum Of modern art
At the museum, you mustn't smoke or take photos or videos with the flash on.
You can't speak loudly and you must turn off your cell phone as well. Sometimes, there might be a lot of people so you should buy tickets online. In case you're having a problem, you can call the museum's phone number or you can visit our website. You might want to buy some souvenir so you should go to the museum's gift shop!
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The Museum of Modern Art
At the museum, you mustn't smoke or take photos or videos with the flash on.
You can't mustn't [here I think "mustn't" is better because "can't" implies that you are not able] speak loudly [or You should speak quietly] and you must turn off your cell phone as well. Sometimes, there might be a lot of people so you should buy tickets online. In case you're having a problem, you can call the museum's phone number or you can visit our [you are speaking as an employee of the museum?] website. You might want to buy some souvenirs so you should go to the museum's gift shop! [Or, If you want to buy some souvenirs, you should go to the museum's gift shop.]
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