Personal statement
Hey guys, I would like you correct me my personal statement for my curriculum vitae, the introduction part in the curriculum:
A recent graduate with a degree in Science of Physical Activities and Sports. A professional and really motivated person always in continuous training and learning. During my degree and the jobs I have had, I have developed an excellent eye for detail, due to the heavy demands of assignments and research. As a result, I am also able to work under pressure, especially when balancing my educational workload with anothers jobs. Through utilising my communications skills when working as an entertainer in a hotel, I have developed successful working relationships. I am looking for a challenge which allows me to professionally grow up in a foreign country.
Thank you so much!!
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Personal statement
Hey guys, I would like you to correct my personal statement for my curriculum vitae, the introduction part of the curriculum:
A recent graduate with a degree in Exercise Science and Sports. A professional and really motivated person who is always continuously training and learning. During my degree and the jobs I have had, I have developed an excellent eye for detail due to the heavy demands of assignments and research. As a result, I am also able to work under pressure, especially when balancing my educational workload with another jobs. Through utilising my communication skills when working as an entertainer in a hotel, I have developed successful working relationships. I am looking for challenges which will allow me to professionally advance (in my skills) in a foreign country.
Thank you so much!!
Well done, Carlos! Have a look at other CV samples especially those who have degrees in Exercise Science and Sports Science for a better idea of a more comprehensive CV. Well done on your efforts so far!
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