Greg's Jounals (Wimpy Kid)
It was Wednesday on Greg’s journals. Wednesday is the phys Ed day at Greg’s school, so he got the chance to sneak off to check if the cheese was still on the floor of the basketball court.
This piece of cheese causes a big problem for kids. It even made them stop playing there, although It was the only court had a hoop with a net.
This problem arose because the cheese became all moldy and nasty. What made a bigger problem when one kid Darren Walsh started what it called Cheese Touch by touching the cheese with his bare hands, and now he has to pass the touch to someone else. the same idea as cooties.
There is another kid named Abe who actually got the cheese touch in April, and no body would even come near him for the rest of the year.
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Greg's Jounals (Wimpy Kid)
It was Wednesday on Greg’s journals. Wednesday is the phys Ed day at Greg’s school, so he got the chance to sneak off to check if the cheese was still on the floor of the basketball court.
This piece of cheese causes a big problem for kids. It even made them stop playing there, although It was the only court that had a hoop with a net.
This problem arose because the cheese became all moldy and nasty. What made a bigger problem was when one kid Darren Walsh started what it ("he called", or "was called", or "is called")called Cheese Touch by touching the cheese with his bare hands, and now he has to pass then passing the touch to someone else. It is the same idea as cooties.
There is another kid named Abe who actually got the cheese touch in April, and no body would even come near him for the rest of the year.
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