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Is this well written? At the mental health unit, I was responsible for child and adolescent mental health workshops in which I talked with parents about various mental health topics. I evaluated girls from the emergency department to determine whether or not sexual abuse had occurred and worked with sexual assault survivor therapy groups implementing cognitive behavioural and art therapies. My roles also included to work in the behavioural program that is run annually for children with ADHD, learning disabilities, anxiety disorders, depression and behavioural problems; and to deliver occupational activities for the elderly therapy group. NGO I volunteered as a storyteller in a public school. My main tasks were researching what type of books to read and developing drawing sessions after storytelling with 8-year-olds. I also followed the children’s progress and worked with the teacher to collect information to adapt my interventions.

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Is this well written?

At the mental health unit, I was responsible for child and adolescent mental health workshops in which I talked with parents about various mental health topics.
I evaluated girls from the emergency department to determine whether or not sexual abuse had occurred and worked with sexual assault survivor therapy groups implementing cognitive behavioural and art therapies.
My roles also included to work working in the behavioural program that is run annually for children with ADHD, learning disabilities, anxiety disorders, depression and behavioural problems; and to deliver delivering occupational activities for the elderly therapy group.

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I volunteered as a storyteller in a public school. My main tasks were researching what type of books to read and developing drawing sessions after storytelling with 8-year-olds. I also followed the children’s progress and worked with the teacher to collect information to adapt my interventions.

Hey, 
It sounds like a very hard but extremely rewarding job. My mother is a sex expert and she volunteers for the police (of course it is not the same). She always talks about how extremely challenging the job is but how she could never do another one.
Anyway, good on the notebook entry :) 
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Is this well written?

At the mental health unit, I was responsible for parent workshops on child and adolescent mental health workshops dealing with various mental health topics.

I evaluated girls from the emergency department to determine whether or not sexual abuse had occurred and worked with sexual assault survivor therapy groups implementing cognitive behavioural and art therapies.

My roles also included to working in the behavioural program that is run annually for children with ADHD, learning disabilities, anxiety disorders, depression and behavioural problems; and to delivering occupational therapy activities for the elderly therapy group.

NGO

I volunteered as a storyteller in a public school. My main tasks were researching what type of books to read and developing follow-up drawing (art) activities for the 8-year-olds after the storytelling sessions. I also followed the children’s progress and worked with the teacher to collect information to adapt my interventions.
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