My Birthday 2
Last Wednesday was my Birthday. My broche asked me to go to the hills near Verona with his friends.
I went to my brother’s home at 9.00 and then we went to a locality at 10 Km where met the other people.
We organized two cars and started our trip to arrived to the park under the hills. We walked for 8.0 km in the middle of the nature, we met other groups of people and near a little wood with met a deer.
At 13.00 we reached a chalet with a restaurant where ate some typical food and drunk two kinds of beer, very good. We were happy and song some Italian songs with the landlord and his staff.
My friends gave me a gift, a ticket for a weekend in Firenze.
At 16.00 we returned at the cars and so we came back home.
I enjoyed myself and I want to thank my brother and my friend to the trip and the gift.
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My Birthday (Part 2)
Last Wednesday was my birthday. My brother asked me to go to the hills near Verona with his friends.
I went to my brother’s house at 9.00 and then we went to an area 10 Km away where we met some other people.
We organized two cars and started our trip to arrived to the park *under the hills. - (*Is the park under the ground?)
We walked for 8.0 km in the middle of the nature in the countryside, met some more groups of people there and *saw a deer near a little wood. (*We can't meet animals)
At 13.00 we reached a chalet with a restaurant where we ate some typical food and drank two very good kinds of beer. We were happy and sang some Italian songs with the landlord and his staff.
My friends gave me a gift: a ticket for a weekend in *Firenze. (Or you can say Florence in English)
At 16.00 we returned to the cars and so went back home.
I enjoyed myself and I want to thank my brother and my friend for the trip and the gift.
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