The Wangs family(please help modify it)
The Wangs live at 128 Huachang road.In the morning,Mr.wang's son and daughter-in-low go to work.His granddaughter goes to school.Mr.wang takes his granddaughter go to school every day.Mrs Wang always stays at home and does her housework every day.
The Wangs always eat their lunch at noon.In the afternoon,Mr.Wang usually go the gym take exercise and his wife go to shopping.Sometimes they see their friends,and drink tea together.The middle school usually finish at 4.Mr.Wang picks up granddaughter from school.In the evening ,Wang's son and daughter -in-low come home from work ,they arrive home late.At night,the kid always does her homework,then plays piano,then go to bed.Mr.Wang usually reads his newspaper,sometimes he and his wife watch television.But Mr.Wang often watch news and his wife likes teleplay.
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The Wangs Family(please help modify it)
The Wangs live at 128 Huachang Road.__In the morning,_Mr._Wang's son and daughter-in-law go to work while his granddaughter goes to school.__Mr.wang takes brings/walks his granddaughter go to school every day.
The Wangs always eat have their lunch at noon.__In the afternoon,_Mr.Wang usually goes to the gym take exercise and his wife goes to shopping.__Sometimes they see meet their friends,and drink to have tea together. __The middle school Classes usually finish end at 4pm and so Mr.Wang picks up the granddaughter from school.In the evening, , Mr. Wang's son and daughter -in-law come home from work ,they arrive home and usually late.__At night,the kid granddaughter always does her homework,_then plays piano,then before going to bed.__Mr.Wang usually reads his newspaper,_but sometimes he and his wife watches television with his wife. __However, But Mr.Wang often watches the news and while his wife likes to watch shows teleplay.
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