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A healthy lifestyle I stick to A healthy life style I have been sticking to is what I call eat well, sleep well, keep exercising. I was not in a good shape when I was in my junior hjgh. I got cold easily and didn't feel enernetic when studying. So I turned to the internet to find way to build up my body. It was the first time when I had paid attetion to healthy lifestyle and this life pattern does work. Sleep well means sleeping for 8 hours; going to bed and getting up early. 8 hours' sleep makes sure that I have enough enery to study and going to bed in an early hour like 11 o'clock can strengthen my immunity because the body begin to detoxify and secret helpful substances in this hour. Eating well does not mean eaing as much as possible; instead, it means restrain ourself and eat properly. There are some foods on my daily must-list. The first type of them are fruits and vegetables which is rich in vitamins and fiber. The vatious vitamins they contain can also enhance my immunity, thereby prevent my body from diseases. And the fiber in them makes my stomache function well, digest the food and take in nutritions more effectively. Eating properly works better when combined with exercise. Beacause of this, I jog on an everyday basis, usually five kilometers in thirty munites. After it, I can fall in sleep easily. This lifestyles a make real different in my health. Now I hardly get ill and have more energy in studying. (I keep using "have energy to study". What is the alternative way of saying so? By the way, does this composition lack conjuction, which makes it sounds sudden and unnatural?)

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A healthy lifestyle I stick to

A healthy life style I have been sticking to is what I call eating well, sleeping well, and routinely exercising. I was not in good shape when I was in junior high. I got cold easily and didn't feel energetic when studying. So, I turned to the internet to find ways to build up my body. It was the first time I paid attention to healthy lifestyle. This life habit does work.

Sleeping well means sleeping for 8 hours; going to bed and getting up early. Eight hours' sleep makes sure that I have enough energy to study and going to bed in an early hour, like 11 o'clock, can strengthen my immunity because the body begins to detoxify and secrete helpful substances. Eating well does not mean eating as much as possible. Instead, it means restrain yourself and eating properly. There are some foods on my daily “must” list. The first are fruits and vegetables which are rich in vitamins and fiber. The various vitamins they contain can also enhance my immunity, thereby preventing my body from diseases. The fiber in them makes my stomache function well, digest food, and take in nutritions more effectively. Eating properly works better when combined with exercise. Because of this, I jog on a daily basis, usually five kilometers in thirty munites. After that, I can fall asleep easily.

This lifestyles makes a real difference to my health. Now, I hardly get ill and have more energy to carry out my studies.
(I keep using "have energy to study". What is the alternative way of saying so? By the way, does this composition lack conjuction, which makes it sounds sudden and unnatural?)


HI. YOUR COMPOSITION IS FAIRLY GOOD. AND YOUR CONJUNCTIONS ARE FINE. BUT IT SEEMS YOU SOMETIMES HAVE SOME TROUBLE IN ENSURING THAT YOUR VERB TENSES MATCH YOUR SUBJECTS

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