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An tourist attractions introduction to a newly-arrived foreigner Dear Mr. Cook, I am writing to introduce you some typical and well-known attractions in the city of Guangzhou. Firstly, I would recommend the Lingnan Impression Park, which is famous for its unique and traditional south China culture, located in the Higher Education Mega Centre. Plenty of Lingnan style architectures are seated in the park, embellished with exquisite carvings, statues, paintings, and ornate scrolls. Also, if you are interested in the modern life and local food, Shangxiajiu Pedestrian Street, I think, is a perfect choice to get a first taste of Guangzhou. Last but not least, Sun-Yatsen University is worthwhile visiting. It is considered as one of the most beautiful university campuses in China, with variety of more than 100-year old buildings and plants. I hope that my recommendation would be helpful and if you need further information or assistance, please revert. Yours sincerely, Li Ming

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An introduction to tourist attractions for a newly-arrived foreigner

Dear Mr. Cook,

I am writing to introduce you to some typical and well-known attractions in the city of Guangzhou.

First, I would recommend the Lingnan Impression Park, which is famous for its unique and traditional South China culture located in the Higher Education Mega Centre. Plenty of Lingnan style architecture are found in the park embellished with exquisite carvings, statues, paintings and ornate scrolls. Also, if you are interested in the modern life and local food, Shangxiajiu Pedestrian Street, I think, is a perfect choice to get a first taste of Guangzhou. Last but not least, Sun-Yatsen University is worth visiting. It is considered as one of the most beautiful university campuses in China with a variety of plants and buildings more than 100 years old.

I hope that my recommendation is helpful and if you need further information or assistance, please reply.

Your's sincerely,
Li Ming

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An tourist attractions introduction to a newly-arrived foreigner

Dear Mr. Cook,

I am writing to introduce you to some typical and well-known attractions in the city of Guangzhou.

Firstly, I would recommend visiting the Lingnan Impression Park, which is famous for its unique and traditional southern Chinese culture, located in the Higher Education Mega Centre. Plenty of Lingnan style architectures are located in the park, embellished with exquisite carvings, statues, paintings, and ornate scrolls. Also, if you are interested in the modern life and local food, Shangxiajiu Pedestrian Street, I think, is a perfect choice to get a first taste of Guangzhou. Last but not least, Sun-Yatsen University is worth a visit. It is considered as one of the most beautiful university campuses in China, with variety of 100+ year old buildings and plants.

I hope that my recommendation will be helpful and if you need further information or assistance, please feel free to ask.

Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
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