My Summer Vacation (Day 5: Edinburgh)
On the 5th day, after having a traditional homemade English breakfast, I caught a train for Edinburgh.
When I got out of the Edinburgh rail station, I was stunned by the fascinating townscape I saw there. I didn't know there are a number of well-preserved historic buildings in Edinburgh. I felt that the picture which comes to Japanese people's mind when they hear the UK may be more similar to the townscape in Edinburgh than that in London where tons of modern buildings are.
While I rarely drink whiskey, I stopped by at a museum called the Scotch Whisky Experience where visitors can learn about whiskey. The tour I joined at the museum was so interesting that I tried a cup of Scottish coffee, which is coffee flavored with Scotti whiskey, at a pub nearby. It was scrumptious.
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My Summer Vacation (Day 5: Edinburgh)
On the 5th day, after having a traditional homemade English breakfast, I caught a train for Edinburgh.
When I got out of the Edinburgh rail station, I was stunned by the fascinating townscape I saw there. I hadn't known there are a number of well-preserved historic buildings in Edinburgh. I was hit with the feeling [makes it clearer that you got that feeling at the very moment you saw the landscape for the first time, as opposed to some point before or after] that the picture which comes to Japanese people's mind when they hear the UK should [not sure what you're trying to convey here, but I think you're not suggesting it's already the case, but that it *should* be the case?] more closely resemble the townscape in Edinburgh than that in London with its tons of modern buildings.
While I rarely drink whiskey, I stopped by at a museum called the Scotch Whisky Experience where visitors can learn about whiskey. The tour I joined at the museum was so interesting that I tried a cup of Scottish coffee (coffee flavored with Scottish whiskey) at a pub nearby. It was scrumptious.
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My Summer Vacation (Day 5: Edinburgh)
I caught a train for Edinburgh after having a traditional homemade English breakfast on the 5th day of my trip.
When I got out of the Edinburgh rail station, I was stunned by the fascinating townscape I saw there. I didn't know there are a number of well-preserved historic buildings in Edinburgh. I felt that the picture which comes to Japanese people's mind when they hear the UK is more similar to the townscape in Edinburgh than that in London. (where tons of modern buildings are.)
While I rarely drink whiskey, I stopped by at a museum called the Scotch Whisky Experience where visitors can learn about whiskey. The tour I joined at the museum was so interesting that I tried a cup of Scottish coffee, a coffee flavored with Scotti whiskey, at a pub nearby. It was delicious. (scrumptious.) <-- we don't really use this word.
Wow your English writing skills are amazing! Hopefully my Japanese writing skills become as good as your English skills!
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