JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON August 6th
I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?
JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON August 6th
I am wondering if I am putting on fat gradually, these days. Actually I realized why I put on fat, because I eat some foods contain lots sugar, something like ice cream and chocolates in middle of every night up until 2 days ago. It is sure thing that is because putting on fat, but then, these days was really special days for me. I had blast days with my old friend, and I had taken a few days-off-works, like little vacation some people call. So, I wanted to eat some sweat foods that I don't do it as usual. But then for me, it was special days as I said before. So that's why I did it. Okay, from now on, it is the key to keep healthy body. First of all, I have to try to work out every day especially I will focus on my berry. I have to, no..I must try to work my abs. Without thinking, I realize my stomach has extra fat. So I have to remove fat from my berry. Plus should I swim for about an hour? My gym I go as usual is with pool, so if I want to swim, I can do this anytime. Okay, I will do this tomorrow. My fitness tomorrow is set. The rest of what I have to do is that I do my menu perfectly.
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Gaining Weight August 6th
I am wondering if I've been gradually putting on weight these days. Actually, who am I kidding? I know I have. I've been eating foods containing tons of sugar. For the last two nights I've been gorging on ice cream and chocolate in the middle of the night. I am sure this is what did it. The last few days have been exceptional days for me though. An old friend and I took a few days off from work for a little vacation. We were having a blast so I did some splurging on dessert. There you have it. From now on I'm going to work on being more healthy. First, I'm going to work out every day. I'm going to focus on my abs. This is a must. This is where my extra fat is. I'm considering swimming an hour a day as well. The gym I go to has a pool so I can add this into my plan. I'm going to start tomorrow. My fitness goal for tomorrow is now set. The next thing I need to do now is come up with a nutrition plan.
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今日は！サミと申します。当然日記を書き直しています。君の日記は分かりやすいです。：）
Recently I think I've been gaining weight. ("putting on fat" sounds a little harsh, you can say "gaining weight" or "putting on weight" instead for it to be softer.)
Actually I know why I'm gaining weight, it's because I've been eating food that has ("contain" is a good word but it sounds too formal.) lots of sugar, things like ice cream and chocolates. I've been eating them every night in the middle of the night up until 2 days ago.
This is definitely why I've been putting on weight. However, recently I've been having holidays and vacations. I had a fun time with an old friend and I even took off work for a few days, like a mini-vacation some people would say. So I wanted to eat some sweet ("sweat" is 汗 and "sweet" is 甘い）things that I don't normally eat since it was a special occasion like I said before.
So that's why I did it, but from now on the key is to keep a healthy body. First of all, I have to try to work out every day especially my core. ("Belly" not "berry" is お腹 but for exercise we would normally say "core" for this area.)
I have to... no I must try to work out my abs. While not paying attention, I realized my stomach has gained extra fat. So I need to lose my belly fat. Plus, should I swim for about an hour? The gym I usually go to has a pool, so if I want to swim I can anytime. Okay, I will do this tomorrow. My fitness plan for tomorrow is set. The next thing I need to do is plan my meals perfectly.
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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON August 6th
First of all, I have to try to work out every day. I will especially I will focus on my berry belly. I have to, no..I must try to work on my abs. Without thinking noticing, I realized my stomach has gained extra fat. So I have to remove lose fat from my berry belly. Plus Also, should I swim for about an hour? My The gym I usually go to as usual is with has a pool, so if I want to swim, I can do this it anytime.
Okay, I will plan on doing do this tomorrow. My fitness plan for tomorrow is set. The rest of what I have to do is that I do (or keep to) my menu meal plan perfectly.
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Recently I wonder if I have been gaining weight. Actually, I know why I'm gaining weight, it's because I've been eating food that has lots of sugar, things like ice cream and chocolates. I've been eating them every night in the middle of the night up until 2 days ago. This is definitely why I've been putting on weight. However, recently I've been having holidays and vacation. I had a blast with my old friend, and I took a few days off work, like a mini-vacation some people would say. So I wanted to eat some sweet things that I don't normally eat. But like I said, they were special days, so that's why I did it. Okay, from now on, it is key to keep a healthy body. First of all, I have to try to work out every day. I will especially focus on my belly. I have to...no, I must try to work on my abs. Without noticing, I realized my stomach has gained extra fat. So I have to lose fat from my belly. Also, should I swim for about an hour? The gym I usually go to has a pool, so if I want to swim I can anytime. Okay I will do this tomorrow. My fitness plan for tomorrow is set. The next to do is that I do my meal plan perfectly.
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