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No 58 My classmates My classmate came to Shenzhen this Friday, she often came to Shenzhen for a business trip. We also met from time to time. So this time, I asked her to have dinner together. When she arrived, wow, she was so thin. She told me that she ate a lot in the morning and did not eat rice at lunch, just took some oatmeal. That's the secret of her being so thin. I kept running these days, but I felt more hungry than before. When I was hungry I took some milk or some fruit. Though I am not fat, I still hope to lose five kilograms. That will make me younger. I will go to Shanghai next Wednesday, I will take my laptop with me. I will share the days in Shanghai. And I will run and run, I am happy when I am running.

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No 58 My classmates

My classmate came to Shenzhen this Friday, she often came comes to Shenzhen for a business trip. We also met meet from time to time. So this time, I asked her to have dinner together. When she arrived, wow, she was so thin. She told me that she ate a lot in the morning and did not eat rice at lunch, just took some oatmeal. That's the secret of her being so thin.

I kept running these days* recently/for the last few days, but I felt more hungry than before. When I was hungry I took some milk or some fruit. Though I am not fat, I still hope to lose five kilograms. That will make me younger.

I will go to Shanghai next Wednesday, I will take my laptop with me. I will share??? the days in Shanghai. And I will run and run, I am happy when I am running.

*these days - is used to compare the present with a quite distant past, a bit like nowadays, but closer. eg When he was younger he used to drink a lot and be crazy but these days he lives a very stable family life.

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