WILDLIFE
I watched "WILDLIFE" today.
There are fewer cinemas that are showing this film, so I went to the Ebisu Garden Cinema.
I can go anywhere, for Jake Gyllenhaal.
Although, I wasn't expecting it that much because of the story was a kind of the family drama and main roles are the wife and son.
Well, I could fully enjoy the film. It was so good.
Of course, you know, Jake Gyllenhaal was perfect and also,
the actress who played the wife was awesome.
The son was 14 years old.
Despite I hate teenagers, I was so moved and I thought "Hey, you come with me, come to my place".
The best thing was the color of the movie.
It was not only landscapes but also costumes, cars and etc. I really like the taste of the colors. I would like you to watch it on the big screen.
I’m sure that the director is an actor and he is young. He is really talented, isn’t he?
I don’t talk much about details because it would be a spoiler, but this is a very good movie.
Maybe it’s going to finish showing in shortly so if you are interested it, go to the cinema as soon as possible.
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WILDLIFE
I watched "WILDLIFE" today.
There are fewer aren't many cinemas that are showing this film, so I went to the Ebisu Garden Cinema.
I can go anywhere, for Jake Gyllenhaal.
Although, I wasn't expecting to enjoy it that much because of the story was a kind of the a family drama and main roles are the wife and son.
Of course, as you know, Jake Gyllenhaal was perfect, and also, the actress who played the wife was awesome.
The son was 14 years old.
Despite the fact that I hate teenagers, I was so moved and I thought "Hey, you come with me, come to my place".
The best thing was the color of the movie.
It was not only landscapes but also costumes, cars, and etc. I really like the taste of the colors. I would like you to watch it on the big screen.
I’m sure that the director is an actor and he is young. He is really talented, isn’t he?
I don’t won't talk much about details because it would be a spoiler, but this is it was a very good movie.
Great writing Shino! I will look into this movie. Your review definitely makes the film seem enticing!
I added in a couple commas and made them bold but it may be hard to tell. After the word "perfect" when you said "Jake Gyllenhaal was perfect," and after the word "cars" in "custumes, cars, etc."
Also, when you say "I’m sure that the director is an actor and he is young," this should probably be rewritten as "The director is a young actor."
Overall your writing conveys a sense of fun and humor, and it was a delight to read! I would love to read more and help you further improve! Feel free to book a trial lesson with me to see if we would be a good match!
ちなみに僕は日本語も話せますから、伝えにくい事とかあればぜひ日本語で話してもオッケーですよ！
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Hello Amanda!
Absolutely I do!!
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I agree with the below corrections. I just wanted to add that I, too, would go anywhere for Jake Gyllenhaal xD.
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