A substitute for humanity
A substitute for humanity
Reading books substitutes for thinking ,PC does for calculate and media does for finding fun by ourself.
Also, the advancement of technology is getting to prepare to substitute for the five senses.
The warning about taking a passive attitude towards means makes us to rethink our attitude towards the means.
When people give up their emotions and thinking by ourself, they lose one humanity again.
人らしさの代替
読書は,自分で考えることを
パソコンは、計算することを
メディアは、楽しさを見出すことを,代替する
また、テクノロジーの進歩は、五感の代わりを準備する
手段に対し、受け身な態度をとることへの警告は、
それら手段に対する、自身の態度を再考させる
人が感情を手放し、自ら考え、意見を持つことを放棄した時、
人らしさをまた一つ、失う
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I understood what you were getting at in your writing. I would rewrite this paragraph as follows:
A Substitute for Humanity
Reading books can be thought of as a substitute for thinking, just as computers can be used for calculation, and different forms of media can serve as a way for people to discover their own personal joy in life.
Additionally, the advancement of technology is leading to potential substitutions for the five senses.
Attitudes towards this topic have served as a warning towards the potential impact of this.
When people give up their natural thoughts and emotions, they can lose their sense of humanity.
This is also a pretty advanced topic so please understand that it may be hard for even some native English speakers to get these thoughts across, so please don't be disheartened by all of my changes! I see great potential in your writing and I'm sure I would be able to help you improve it if you would be interested in booking some lessons with me. 僕は日本語も話せますけど読むのはちょっと苦手なので、一緒に話してみれば伝えたいことをもっと正確に表現することとか手伝えますよ！
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