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What you think about love ? I think that love is capricious and sentimental, It get arrive when want and it leave without minor warning The lover is a emotion with colors, leftovers and numerous faces. Accept and enjoy of it while remain but you don't lost your time worrying you to your disappearance so you never get that come back it everyone who that have love of true never lost Please help me with mistakes.

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What do you think about love ?

I think that love is capricious and sentimental. It get arrives when it wants and it leaves without minor any warning.
The A lover is like an emotion with colors, leftovers and numerous faces. Accept and enjoy of it while remain you can, but you don't lost wast your time worrying if it leaves... so you never get that come back it everyone who that have love of true never lost

Please help me with mistakes.

Very good start Dahiana! I was unsure of the last sentence. You might want to simplify your sentence by breaking it into separate smaller sentences. Keep at it!

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..sentimental. It arrives when it wants and leaves without warning. (Or replace “minor” with the word “any” or “little”. Use “an” in front of emotion but be careful about using the word “leftovers”. “Leftovers” can mean the food that is left from the last meal and reheated again. “Mom, are we having leftovers again!” Accept and enjoy it while you can, but don’t lose time worrying about when it will leave? I am not sure what you are trying to say here. Will you never get the time back from worrying, our worrying about love returning? Everyone who has loved has never lost. I believe it was Shakespeare that said “better to have lost at love than never be loved at all” I hope my corrections are helpful.

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