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I tried to rewrite two stories that others wrote 1. I will graduate in 3 months. E really don’t want to leave this place. Maybe I will back here to continue my PhD in few years. But now I don’t have a plan to apply it (because actually it’s really hard for me. Master was already hard for me hhh.) I’m recently trying to look for a job. 2. This weekend I went to see a movie named ‘My Best Summer’ with my two friends. This movie tells a story about two senior students who knew each other by their names to became deskmate, and then fell in love with each other. This love story started sweet, although without a smooth process, but anyway it had a happy ending. Thanks in advance for correcting my mistakes.

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Yours was really good :). I've just added in a few words in blue/ changed the sentence order to make it flow a bit better. The parts in yellow highlighter are additional options/ explanations.

1.   I will graduate in 3 months. E I really don’t want to leave this place. Maybe in a few years I will back here to continue my PhD in few years. But right now I’m not don’t have a planning to apply for it  one (because it’s actually it’s really hard for me. My Masters was already hard for me hhh.) I’m Recently I’m/ I’ve been trying to look for a job.
 
2.   This weekend I went to see a movie named ‘My Best Summer’ with my two friends. This movie tells a story about (or: tells the story of) two senior students who knew each other just by their names to and who then became deskmates, and then eventually fell in love (with each other- not necessary but not wrong). This love story started sweet- although without it wasn’t a smooth process (although it wasn’t all plain sailing- sounds more idiomatic)- but anyway it had a happy ending.

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