Hi, everyone! Please, check my suggestions. I used Past Simple and special phrases.
1.When i was 18 years, i and my friends often to goofed around.
2.We went for a walk on the centre city and asked each other: How about dropped over to dinner?
3.Yesterday my friend met a man for a one night stand.
4.Did you remember that you pig out sushi on the party in last Saturday?
5.I hanged out in a club with my classmates at the weekend.
6.In last year that Festival was sick!
7. 5 years ago, when we celebrated our graduation, all people was plastered.
8. No, you're wrong. I did not merry yesterday.
9. What did you up to do something after Mary`s Birthday yesterday?
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Hi, everyone! Please, check my suggestions. I used Past Simple and special phrases.
1.When i was 18 years, i and my friends often to goofed around.
When I was 18 years old, my friends and I often goofed around.
2.We went for a walk on the centre city and asked each other: How about dropped over to dinner?
We went for a walk in the centre of town and asked each other: "Fancy dropping over for dinner?"
3.Yesterday my friend met a man for a one night stand.
Perfect!!!
4.Did you remember that you pig out sushi on the party in last Saturday?
Do you remember pigging out on sushi at the party last Saturday?
5.I hanged out in a club with my classmates at the weekend.
I hung out in the club with my classmates on the weekend.
6.In last year that Festival was sick!
Last year that festival was sick!
7. 5 years ago, when we celebrated our graduation, all people was plastered.
5 years ago, when we celebrated out graduation, everyone was plastered.
8. No, you're wrong. I did not merry yesterday.
No, you're wrong. I wasn't (was not) merry yesterday.
9. What did you up to do something after Mary`s Birthday yesterday?
What did you get up to after Mary's birthday yesterday?
hope this helps.
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Hi, red is add or fix, yellow is delete, and blue is for things I added but wasn’t sure if they were what you meant to say. Hope it helps.
Hi, everyone! Please, check my suggestions. I used Past Simple and special phrases.
1.When I was 18 years old, my friends and I often to goofed around.
2.We went for a walk in the centre city and asked each other: How about you dropped in for dinner?
3.Yesterday, my friend met a man for a one night stand.
4.Do you remember that you pigged out on sushi at the party in last Saturday?
5.I hung out in a club with my classmates (this? last?) weekend.
6.In last year that The festival last year was sick!
7. 5 years ago, when we celebrated our graduation, everyone was plastered.
8. No, you're wrong. I did not (get married?) yesterday.
9. What did you get up to do something after Mary`s birthday (party?) yesterday?
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1.When I was 18 years, my friends and I often goofed around.
2.We went for a walk in the city centre and asked each other: How about dropping over to dinner?
3.Yesterday my friend met a man for a one night stand.
4.Do you remember that you pigged out sushi at the party last Saturday?
5.I hanged out in a club with my classmates at the weekend.
6.Last year that Festival was sick!
7. 5 years ago, when we celebrated our graduation, all people were plastered.
8. No, you're wrong. I was not merry yesterday.
9. What were you up to do after Mary`s Birthday yesterday?
2.We went for a walk in the city centre and asked each other: How about dropping over to dinner?
3.Yesterday my friend met a man for a one night stand.
4.Do you remember that you pigged out sushi at the party last Saturday?
5.I hanged out in a club with my classmates at the weekend.
6.Last year that Festival was sick!
7. 5 years ago, when we celebrated our graduation, all people were plastered.
8. No, you're wrong. I was not merry yesterday.
9. What were you up to do after Mary`s Birthday yesterday?
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Hi, everyone! Please, check my suggestions. I used Past Simple and special phrases.
1. When I was 18 years old, my friends and I often goofed around.
2. We went for a walk in the city centre and asked each other: How about dropping over to dinner?
3. Yesterday, my friend met a man for a one-night stand.
4. Do you remember that you pigged out on sushi at the party last Saturday?
5. I hung out in a club with my classmates at the weekend.
6. Last year, that festival was sick!
7. 5 years ago, when we celebrated our graduation, all the people were plastered.
8. No, you're wrong. I was not merry yesterday.
9. What did you get up to do something after Mary's birthday yesterday?
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1. When I was 18 years old my friends and I often goofed around.
2. We went for a walk in the city centre and and I asked my friend if they fancied dropping over for dinner.
3. Yesterday my friend had a one night stand.
4. Did you (do you- sounds more natural in present tense) remember pigging out on sushi at the party last Saturday? Or- I pigged out on sushi at the party last Saturday.
5. At the weekend I hung out in a club with my classmates.
6. The festival last year was sick!
7. When we celebrated our graduation five years ago everyone was plastered.
8. No, you’re wrong. I wasn’t merry yesterday (grammatically correct but sounds a little odd)
9. I was up to doing it but no one else felt like it after Mary’s birthday yesterday. OR Were you feeling up to going out after Mary’s birthday yesterday? (I’ve added some more words in as the sentence doesn’t quite make sense without them)
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