First love Today is Tanabata Festival , I suddendly remembered the moment that I met the boy who I first fell in love with quietly,three years ago,his smile was just like sunshine and shined into my

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First love Today is Tanabata Festival , I suddendly remembered the moment that I met the boy who I first fell in love with quietly,three years ago,his smile was just like sunshine and shined into my heart.I was deeply atractted by him .Since then I was looking forward to seeing him everyday.But I didn't want anyone to notice I 'm falling in love with him,so I kept my secret for 3 years,only because I was timidat at that time,and afraid of being rejected.However I changed my mind after a year.He was not him anymore,I was still the girl .He changed into a bad guy gradually.He did all of the things that I hated.He didn't study hard any more.He won't be my sunshine and clean boy any more.But I was not feeling sad,I had grown up,It was just a sweet memory for me.I 'll keep it in my mind forever.

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First love

Today is Tanabata Festival ,
I suddendly remembered the moment that I met the boy who I first fell in love with quietly,three years ago. His smile was just like sunshine and it shined shone into my heart. I was deeply attracted by him. Since then I was looking forward to seeing him everyday. But I didn't want anyone to notice I'm that I was falling in love with him,so I kept my secret for 3 years,only because I was timid at that time, and afraid of being rejected. However I changed my mind after a year. He was not himself anymore, I was still the same girl. He had gradually changed into a bad guy gradually. He did all of the things that I hated. He didn't study hard anymore. He won't be my sunshine and clean boy any more. But I was not feeling sad. I had grown up. It was just a sweet memory for me. I'll keep it in my mind forever.

There is an English saying: "You never forget your first love." I don't know if it is true or not, but I have not forgotten mine!

Hello Trico!, I'm from Guatemala and learning english, your english level is great, congrats!!!... while I was reading your post I had to write (or try) to write something about it. Love is crazy, sometimes you put all your love in one direction and you can't see other "options" arround you... I'm writing this because that happend to me, my first love was so painful and for seven years I couldn't give me another chance in love... but suddenly I met a girl who change me in many ways and had very good moments... but I couldn't stay in that relationship because I was thinking about my first girlfriend... so, now I'm with my first love again!!! hahahaha, the process that broguht together was hard and painful but was worth it!!!... so my words to you are DONT GIVE UP BECAUSE LOVE CAN GIVE YOU TOO MANY SURPRISES!!! (hope you understan my english!) Bye, Alejandro

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